Biiiiiiiirthdaaaaaaaayfiiiiiiiiiiiiiic!!!

Jun 01, 2008 15:48

Brynn, I looove yoooooou! (don't worry, the extended vowels won't feature in the fic. They aren't zombies- braaaaaaaaaaaains!) I enclose my HEART! Or maybe just an experimental fic. I hope you have an amazingly wonderful biiiiirthday, you're one of my FAVOURITES!

Author: llassah
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Ray/Ray
Length: 1600 words
Rating: NC-17

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belmanoir June 2 2008, 22:48:07 UTC
awwwww!

I LOVE THIS.

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mergatrude June 3 2008, 00:51:22 UTC
Oh. Boys! Sliding inevitably together. &hearts

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mlyn June 3 2008, 06:05:45 UTC
Absolutely beautiful, a little achy but such a sweet relief at the end. And this killed me: This is a different sort of good- not the sort Benny Believes in, not something as simple and brutal as Benny’s

Because yes, Benny's good is both simple and brutal. Excellent.

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brynnmck June 3 2008, 06:10:53 UTC
Oh, Llassah, I adore you. Cat is right, your economy of phrase is just stunning, and I love how understated this is, and every little bit of it rich with meaning, like glorious dark chocolate for the brain. And the end is just... so beautiful, so simple and right, and again, no words wasted... I am on my knees, here. Thank you so much! *hugs you*

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snoopypez June 3 2008, 06:57:33 UTC
oh, boys. This is beautiful and wonderful and hot and full of longing and goodness and the last line and and and.. yeah. Love.

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llassah June 16 2008, 16:25:24 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm so glad it was all that to you- it was one of those fics where I wanted things to go quietly and sort of...close? I don't know how to describe it, but I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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