the start of another story, no title yet but do your worst. (note- this name isnt actually QWERTY)

[local_bookstore]

(just something easy to come up in spell check and replace with whatever his name will be, suggestions

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[trinity0748]

As the sky opened up outside, veins will open up inside of 9864 Fairview Court.

OMG!!!!! That line alone made me shiver...*shudder shudder* As usual I LOVE your metaphors and the story is alredy getting my stomach in knots. Knowing a bit on how he plans on killing them just makes the beginning that much more eerie. *another shudder*

Sometimes when I read ur stories, and realize that YOU actually thought them up... I take a pen and write on my hand to remind myself to never piss you off....

P.S. Happy 6 months.... I made it :)