New song, "Tell Me" (In Progess)

[lofro]

So I just wrote this song a minute ago. No guitar part for it yet. I'm going to go back and clean it up later, but for now, this is what I've got.


I don't know if you know what I do
That I can't get you out of my mind
And that nothing in this world makes me
Happier than the way you treat me kind
I don't know if you know, if I could
Talk to you for three million years
I still feel like there'd be plenty to say
You fill me up with joyful tears
But I can't say a thing
No, I can't say a thing

I don't know if you know, but it's true
That I don't feel like I should even waste your time
I'd like to be clever, I'd like to be poignant
But I'm not a poet 'cause I can barely rhyme
I don't know if you know what I do
That I feel like I'm frozen in time
And I'll I want to do is just talk to you
But my words aren't worth a dime
I can't say a thing
No, I can't say a thing

Why don't you tell me what I'm supposed to say
Why don't you tell me the rules to this game we play
Why don't you tell me what I'm supposed to say
Why don't you tell me the rules to this game we play
Why don't you tell me what I'm supposed to say
Why don't you tell me what I'm supposed to say
Why don't you tell me what I'm supposed to say
Why don't you tell me anything

Like I said... Work in progress.