Lead Me To Water

[logopraxis]

Title: Lead Me To Water
Author: logopraxis 
Characters: Kara, Adama
Pairings: gen (mentions of Kara/Zak)
Spoilers: pre-series (missing scene from 1.4 Act of Contrition)
Rating: PG
Warning: character death (Zak)
Word Count: ~1100
Summary: They're both running low on family. It's time to start fresh.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not making any money.

Author's note: So, real

Comments

[cynicalshadows]

This was really nice. I liked the way Bill reacted to Kara's comment concerning Zak and being a pilot, and then how he apologized for taking his frustration with Lee out on her. Good job.

[logopraxis]

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

[imelda72]

"What I'm saying, Kara, is come fly Vipers for me." <3 <3 <3

I love that line, and that moment. Papadama deciding to take in the lost Starbuck. This was a really moving short story, capturing so much of Kara's losses, and in a brief moment, encapsulating Bill's pain caused by his family's alienation. Nice to end on the positive that grows out of this horrible time for the two of them. Well done!

[logopraxis]

I do love Papadama and looking on the bright side. Glad you do too :) Thanks for reading!

[shah_of_blah]

This is a lovely little scene between the two of them (back when I still liked him!). Very believable. I especially liked what Kara said about her mother belonging in the cemetery, unlike Zak. Well done.

[logopraxis]

It always makes me really happy to know that my characterization comes across as believable, so thanks so much for commenting!

[artemis_90]

Thank you for this nice moment. I love moments like these that cement the Bill and Starbuck bond, outside vipers. Thank you for posting.

[logopraxis]

Heh, you're welcome! But really I should be the one thanking you for taking the time to read and comment, no? So thank you!