Fic: (PotC) Norrington : Butterflies and Hurricanes

[lokisday]

Fandom: PotC in the way in which I tend to mix it with everything else
Main character/s: James Norrington, Floyd Braecken (OC), Other Canon Characters
Rating: PG - 15ish

Pairings: Though this ain't a romance-centered fic, there will almost certainly be some mention of how people are coupled up in various complicated ways. They will mainly be...

Comments

[canadian_jay]

I read this last night and noticed a couple minor typos and such within it - you might want to proofread it once more, if that bothers you. ^_^

Other than that very interesting! His long hair seems.... almost ridiculously long but the rest if quite belieavable for PotC. Good fun, and I can't wait for more!

[lokisday]

Dude, thank you! ^^ Yeah the typoes, I do apologize. Usually I run everything through a spellcheck but I'm typing this one into LJ straight away as it comes into my head, cause Word seriously slows down the work computer. Actually, looking at it slows down the work computer, you get the idea. XD But yes, I shall just copy&paste and run it through a spellcheck now.

The long hair ... let's see, he's gone from shoulder-length to waist length since 1722 .. he's had 14 years. XD Assuming he let it grow without pause. Which he probably didn't. He's just kind of gradually lost the plot since meeting Jack. And seamen did use to have epic queues of hair, I'm just thinking Killick in Master&Commander when it rains... XD

Anyway, do you like privateer/Jamie?!

[canadian_jay]

Lol! Silly Word... have you tried OpenOffice or something similar? That might work better. (Or you could get FF and get a spellcheck in the browser!)

Oh yes! Well, it wasn't the length time so much as the actual length of hair itself. But I suppose my modern colours are showing when I cringe at the thought of a man with loose waist-length hair. *embarrased grin* xD Epic queues are good fun, though!

Do I like privateer!Jamie! I love him. Quite a lot. ^_^ And lulz at the brandy comment!

[lokisday]

I'm home now so i just tried my own word but that doesn't have a program for English spellchecking, as I'm German. Wtf, how hard can it be? How did I use to do this? Working on it. >_>

You're not one of those who go for men with epic hair then? XD I prefer styled hair over length - quality over quantitiy. I've seen too many metalheads with nice but boring plain long hair swinging it about to get too excited over it ... but hell, it's what James told me he had. I supposed I'd let him have his bout of anarchy against convention. XD

Yeah the brandy. He's a bit of a sot isn't he lol Bless him. I suppose he'll get crates of brandy and from ME if he uncovers Floyd!

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[hippediva]

Ahoy mate,

In order to process your application to join pirategasm, I need a DOB as per LJ's rules for Adult Comms. Please either email me the info at Hippediva@aol.com or PM me (and leave your private messages open so I can let you know and send you the community guidelines). *G* Thanks!

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Re: Pirategasm membership

[lokisday]

I have emailed thee ^^

[lolitalockhart]

I love your fic! <3 It was a very wonderful read, I loved your OC's like Kitty and Lord Melville, I like how you write Norrington, it was exciting!

[laviefantasque]

Hi, i can't PM you because of privacy options

Hey,

did you already request a feedback page? Cause I can't let your post go through to the main community if you don't have community feedback. - eglfeedback.livejournal.com - you can fill in the form found here http://community.livejournal.com/eglfeedback/154720.html
and send it to me in PM if you want to make your sales post now.

Thanks!

~Vief

[lokisday]

Hey :) Thank you for adding me!

Yes I've requested a feedback page, the link to my request is here: http://community.livejournal.com/eglfeedback/154720.html?thread=4099936#t4099936

I hope it's okay, because some of my feedback is in German. If you need anything else from me, please don't hesitate to ask. ^^

xx loki

[laviefantasque]

Hey that's okay. Your page is here: http://community.livejournal.com/eglfeedback/828873.html

Good luck with your sales!

And if you want to add me that's fine ^^