The Outcast Princess Soon to be Queen -- Chapter 2: Truly A Monster.

[lokisironmaiden]

The Outcast Princess Soon to be Queen
Chapter 2: Truly A Monster   I hadn’t slept the whole way to the English Court my little sister was dead and so were my parents. They had been asinated and my mother let my baby sister die. I heard horns and then the door to my carriage opened

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[xkshmex]

Again, the story is very interesting. I love the idea of it all, of her being a "monster" and being rushed to queendom. It's all so cool, I really love the characters.
But again, maybe add a little more detail in between dialogue or when she's storming up the staircase. I would also like to know what these characters look like, I only got the description of a few. (And there seems to be quite a few)
I like the transitions of the storyline, I thought certain descriptive words really popped out at me, I would just like to see more so I can feel the full spectrum of your dynamic story :)