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[lokmarie]

I feel like writing poetry, I'm not sure why.

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[maxxchaos]

I also felt like writing poetry without knowing why.
...yeah, yours is way better than mine.

[lokmarie]

I should do more mythological stuff. I have a whole bunch of other mythological stuff I wrote too that I have scattered around the house. Thanks for reminding me indirectly of that.

Practice makes perfect! I actually haven't seen any of your poetry, so I dunno about it....:(

and aww, thanks

[maxxchaos]

My most common poem:
I'm just a lonely potato,
I have eyes but I can't see,
I'm just a lonely potato,
I ask you not eat me.

I'm just a lonely potato,
You will never see my smile,
I'm just a lonely potato,
Haven't spoken in a while.

I'm just a lonely potato,
I have got no shoe nor glove,
I'm just a lonely potato,
I'm waiting for my first love.

...blah.
You're welcome.

[lokmarie]

:(......

[amour_plastique]

"So the humans, they bowed down onto their knees
And sucked at world like a batch of small fleas"

I absolutely love those lines.

[lokmarie]

actually, should I change it to
So the humans said "we'll do as you please"