Comments | lolamyrebel: Hey There, Gotta Second? Ch. 2

lolamyrebel

Hey There, Gotta Second? Ch. 2

Jul 04, 2011 17:49

Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: PG-13 (for now, NC-17 later)
Word Count: 2281
Summary: AU Brittany meets Santana working on a street corner in Manhattan.

Not sure where this idea came from, but please let me know what you guys think.

( Chapter 1 )

Comments 16

lil_cupcake_03 July 5 2011, 01:59:23 UTC

I really like this story!

shqiperia July 5 2011, 02:15:28 UTC

Awesome can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon pretty please?

iloveglee100 July 5 2011, 02:17:00 UTC

This is really good!! They're from Ohio in the show, not Idaho tho :) I suppose it doesn't really matter since it's AU but I thought I'd tell you anyway haha. Okay, annoying comment is over now.
Ps: Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

lolamyrebel July 5 2011, 06:01:12 UTC

Haha, yes yes, Ohio! But, (spoiler) 'this' Brittany is from Ohio, and I didn't really want them both to be from the same place, because as much as I love coincidences, having them both come from Lima would be too much. Ya dig? Thanks for the feedback though, and I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon.

iloveglee100 July 5 2011, 06:10:24 UTC

Oh...oops, sorry. I just thought because Idaho and Ohio kind of sound the same, you may have gotten them mixed up. Sowwy :( I kind of feel like a jerk now ahahaha. But, anyway, I hope you update fast, because I really like where this is going. (I didn't comment on the first one, but can I just say I loved Britt's spastic tears XD And Santana being awkward at a pretty crying lady?)

besmartplaydead July 5 2011, 02:43:31 UTC

Oh, karma, you brilliant bitch.

Haha, this is great. I can totally see Brittany working for an organisation trying to save the turtles and... stuff. She's probably not well informed and doesn't care much for statistics, she just wants the cute animals to be okay, y'know? And Santana trying to buy good fortune, heh. Typical.

Okay, so when do they bone? loljk, but dis gon' be good, I can tell; you write really well!

lolamyrebel July 5 2011, 06:03:00 UTC

Man, I want them to bone all day, every day, but I'm also trying to restrain myself and get a somewhat believable pace going here (sorry). Hopefully I will be able to update enough that you won't be waiting too long. Thanks for reading!

besmartplaydead July 7 2011, 23:33:59 UTC

Ah, don't worry, I was (half) joking. It was worth a shot! It's just the main characters in this at the moment are Santana, Brittany and Sexual Tension, lol. I'm surprisingly patient when it comes to well-written fics, I swear.
But when you get to the point where they do bone, try not to deviate from your current musings of "all day, every day." Hahaha.

novaforever July 5 2011, 03:34:25 UTC

In this moment I fucking loved this story.

Seriously, this is awesome and I love who you told it from both sides. I can't wait for more of these two awkward girls haha.

lolamyrebel July 5 2011, 06:04:39 UTC

Ha, thanks! Yea, I was selfish and wanted to try writing both Brittany/Santana. We'll see how it goes.