Second Chance Idol - Week 1

[lolaslaughter]

She sits at the table where they shared their last meal together remembering

Comments

[i_17bingo]

You really made me feel the pain she was experiencing, and while I think her planned action was crazy, you made it make sense.

[lolaslaughter]

Thank you so much! This was kind of a tough piece for me (especially being my first entry) because it touched on some personal experiences which makes me appreciate your comment so much more! :)

[eternal_ot]

Gosh! I almost expected her to pull that trigger. Glad that you twisted the end.

[kajel]

This just really reaches out and grabs you as you're reading it. Great job.

[halfshellvenus]

I'm glad she heard her husband's voice turning her away from such a terrible and permanent decision. It's not an easy place she's in, but there may still be much worth living for.

[magazhchi]

That could have taken a drastic end. Glad that she heard her husbands voice. You did a great job of creating the tension.