Bestfriend [10/?]

[lolexi]

Title: Bestfriend
Author: lolexi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: high school!au, romance, angst, fluff
Rating: PG-13ish
Summary: Rule to Having a Bestfriend #1: Never, ever- under any circumstances, fall in love with your bestfriend. It was the most important rule, and the only one Kibum had broken.

Comments

[vardagaladhiel]

Quick note about typos:
"His menisturations didn't seem to be working"- I think you mean 'ministrations' instead of 'menisturations'.

"Jjong nearly pulled Kibum into his lap as he continued wailing, tears never seizing to stop from pouring down his cheeks in waterfalls" and "Kibum's heart never seizing to pound"- 'seizing' should be 'ceasing' btw.

Back to actually commenting! Poor Jjong having that guilt about his mother's death! I'm really looking forward to seeing how Jjong reacts to Kibum's confession (and whether he'll even see it as a confession)!

[lolexi]

O: spell check, you douchebag! how could you have not noticed? >__< xD Thank you:3 i'll fix it as soon as I get the chance.
-Jjong didn't hear it. "...going unnoticed in the hybrids of..." yadayadayada. So no confession... yet. :p

[vardagaladhiel]

Oops! I got too caught up in the idea of a confession that I didn't read it properly*blushes*!

[lolexi]

Totally okay, bb. Kekeke~

[lolexi]

;_____; Yus~
Thank you for commenting. :'D

[plainjanesbro]

I comment every chapter even though I don't read them (besides the ending).I'm waiting till they get together or for it to end to actually read the story.Its what I do with every story.
You should post this on asianfanfic you'd get more readers.

[lolexi]

Understandable. :P
And I started to but then I kind of forgot to post there around chapter 6. xD I guess I should start posting again.
But thanks for commenting still^__^

[itsjustjodie]

kibummie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved this chapter~
:)

[lolexi]

Thank you lotsss~ :'D

[one_normal_boy]

This is kinda fluffy? I guess? lol. I like the closeness that Jongkey has for each other! I hope that Jjong can really love Key later!!

[lolexi]

Of course! I wouldn't make a story without a happy ending. ;D
Thank you for commenting♥

[one_normal_boy]

Yay for happy endings. Thankfully it's a happy ending because I don't have the heart to read tragic/ sad endings