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5 is 5 is 5

Jul 25, 2010 22:56

In honour of this being the fifth post
I chose to write the opening like this
-Pentameter, but not at any cost-
Write not about a hug, a shag, a kiss.

Will write about how lovely I do think
You all and awesome your artistic skills.
If you are looking for some fic, this link,
Will bring you to the page with all the fills.

-- Sorry, I simply am not patient ( Read more... )

prompting: 05

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Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 1 anonymous August 5 2010, 01:00:02 UTC

It happens at Ed’s house. It’s been building for months, years even, but it happens when they’re all alone, with Ed’s TV and a couple of cans. There’s no real build-up, no tension or drama. Just one minute, they’re having a laugh, and the next, they’re stepping over that invisible line. It’s not planned, but they couldn’t honestly claim to be surprised ( ... )

Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 01:02:57 UTC

Ed entwines his fingers with Andy’s. “We could keep it a secret,” he says, bargaining.

“For how long?”

For as long as it takes to get you out of my system, Ed wants to tell him. Until it doesn’t hurt not to be around you. Until it becomes routine and boring and the prospect of letting you go doesn’t make me feel like fucking crying. He doesn’t say it, though. He knows, deep down, that it wouldn’t make any difference, and he doesn’t want to add more guilt to Andy’s over-burdened conscience. “I don’t -“ he begins, struggling to arrange his thoughts. “...I don’t want to not do this again. I don’t want it to be just once ( ... )

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 01:09:41 UTC

Wow....
Great stuff Anon

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 07:57:47 UTC

*sniffles*

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 08:17:54 UTC

Wow. Just... Wow. This is wonderful, if heartbreaking. And it has a very realistisc touch that makes it even more poignant. Very well done, authoranon.

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 08:34:50 UTC

Heartbreaking with such a real feel to it. *is teary-eyed*

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 08:44:36 UTC

*weeps*
Seriously, that is SO good.
*weeps some more*

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 09:24:56 UTC

Thank you for this, anon. I love a bit of heartbreak in the morning!

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 09:39:42 UTC

So, so beautiful! &hearts

I happened to listen to "For Good" from Wicked while reading this and now this fic reminds me of the song and the song reminds me of this fic. *sniffles*

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 14:57:57 UTC

:'(

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME, AUTHOR!ANON?

Seriously though, very moving and well written.

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 5 2010, 19:23:48 UTC

*sob!*

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 6 2010, 00:31:02 UTC

This is beautiful. Reality is a heart-breaker. Sigh. Thanks for writing this.

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous August 24 2010, 10:20:54 UTC

I read this when it was first posted, and I just keep coming back to it.

It's incredible, but damn you, author!anon, it makes my heart hurt. ♥

Re: Just Once (unprompted BurnBalls), 2 anonymous January 15 2011, 15:12:18 UTC

Ohh, the bit about him wishing it was longer so he could make the most of it...heartbreaking! And just...him seeing him after and knowing how perfect he is and how perfect it was...this is just...ohhh...intense! Very good job. This killed a little bit of me I think. Amazing fic!

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