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8 - upwards to infinity

Nov 22, 2010 06:15

Welcome to our eighth prompt post.

As ususal, here are a few things to keep in mind:

1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real ( Read more... )

prompting: 08

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Guilty Mandelbell affair anonymous December 6 2010, 21:02:56 UTC

I’d love a fic in which Alastair likes being dominant in bed, but he can’t ask Fiona, and Peter knows that Reinaldo doesn’t want to hurt him, so they begin a guilty, secretive D/s affair, and somehow their respective partners find out, cue much angsty!Reinaldo and angry!Fiona.

(If having Peter’s RL partner is too squicky, it could be partnerless on his part)

Please?

Fill 5/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 13:46:30 UTC

Late into the night, Peter sat on the bed and contemplated the gifts Alastair had left him with. There was the split lip and and the tender bruise on his cheek, not to mention the red burns around his wrists and ankles. There was the thin strap of leather in his hands, its silver buckle glinting in the light from the hallway, and the telltale roll of paper towels Peter had brought up here to clean up his own seed. Out of all those the collar was probably the most bizarre and unexpected - and by far the most breathtaking ( ... )

Fill 6/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 13:51:39 UTC

"I can't talk long," Alastair told his mobile, glancing through the living room window. "Fiona will be home any minute ( ... )

Fill 7a/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 13:55:10 UTC

"You're wearing the collar ( ... )

Fil 7b/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 13:57:47 UTC

Sharply aware of time running out before they both had appointments to keep, Alastair pushed the head of his cock past the tight ring of muscle inside Peter and fucked him savagely, grinding their hips together as he grunted, "They can't find out. They won't find out, okay?" Peter nodded meekly, pushed close to the edge by the brutal thrusts of Alastair's hips. "They had better not. If your boyfriend works out I'm fucking you into next week, god knows what he'll do... and if Fiona so much as suspects..." Scared, he fucked Peter harder. "Then that's it, my life's over. So you had better not breathe a fucking word ( ... )

Fill 8a/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 14:02:00 UTC

That was only their second encounter, but already the two of them felt like great sinners, condemned to hell by the breif moments of pleasure they'd snatched. On his way home from the hotel, Peter just managed to keep from crying in self-disgust. They knew that when they were exposed the looks on their partners' faces would be twice as painful for the knowledge that they'd had the chamce to stop, to leave it there and speak no more of it, but had ignored their good sense and plunged on with the self-destructive course of dishonesty ( ... )

Fill 8b/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 14:03:13 UTC

"If this is your idea of a sick joke -" Her hand trembled as she pointed furiously at him, eyes ablaze. When she saw the truth in her partner's eyes she visibly shrank in on herself, breathing, "I had no idea."

"No. It was a surprise to me," confessed Alastair. "It still is. He just... just arrived out of the blue, we didn't have to think about it. It was like, when we needed each other, we just came together."

Now Alastair did reach for Fiona's hands, and - although she tried to jerk away - he held her firmly and lovingly. "I've said I'm sorry. We can have a nice bonfire of all this stuff I had delivered. What more can you reasonably ask of me?"

With a glare in the direction of the clock, Fiona answered, "There's still a couple of hours before our daughter -" she squeezed his hands harshly "- will be home from school. First I'm going to call Peter and explain to Reinaldo, because he deserves to know." Ignoring the horror in Alastair's eyes, she went on: "He must know, so between us we can keep you and Peter apart as much as ( ... )

Fill 9a/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 14:07:54 UTC

Perhaps it was precognition or perhaps it was paranoia, but from the moment the phone started ringing Peter knew something dreadful had happened ( ... )

Fill 9b/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 14:10:56 UTC

"What you have done," Reinaldo corrected him firmly. "This is your mistake, not mine." And to think I was afraid of breaking you." He sat down on the bottom step, head cradled in his elegant hands as he started to sob. "Where is your heart, Peter? You think I am overreacting? How do you think you would feel if I let another man hold me and kiss me and fuck me, huh?"

Cautiously, Peter tried to hug Reinaldo but the young man stood up abruptly, not looking him in the face. "I feel like an idiot," Reinaldo groaned, wiping his eyes. "Like a prize idiot. I should leave you now, Peter, but I do not think I will. Not yet."

Peter watched, helpless and afraid, as Reinaldo climbed the stairs and vanished into the spare room without so much as a backward glance.

Fill 10/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 14:15:37 UTC

Having watched Fiona fulfil her duty to set off a landmine in Peter and Reinaldo's lives, Alastair sat on the bed and stared numbly into space ( ... )

Re: Fill 10/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 16:32:56 UTC

OP here. *sobs* Anon, this was the most hot/gorgeous/heartwrenching thing I've read in a long time, it's absolutely perfect and I don't know what I did to deserve such a fantastic fill.

Reinaldo is a pleasure (dancing in the kitchen, daww), and it's a shame there isn't as much Peter/Reinaldo as there is Lawdie, say.

Thank you!

Re: Fill 10/10 anonymous December 9 2010, 16:55:11 UTC

^^ *hugs* Oh, OP, I'm just so glad that you like & grateful for the lovely comment ~ <3 As for deserving the fill - you made wonderful prompt, didn't you? ;)

Yes indeed, Mandelsilva is such a neglected pairing, though there have been some truly beautiful fills... here's to lots more Peter/Reinaldo fic in future!

Re: Fill 10/10 anonymous December 10 2010, 00:00:02 UTC

not exactly sure what to write, damn conflicting emotions.
so hot and yet so sad. suppose tears is what most affairs end in.
incredibly good fic! thank you

Re: Fill 10/10 anonymous December 10 2010, 15:29:10 UTC

Thank you! ^^ I'm so glad you like.

Re: Fill 10/10 anonymous February 27 2011, 05:39:51 UTC

I'm a late-comer to this one, so sorry if it's just interruption, but I did end up kind of wanting to argue back to some extent both with Fiona and Reinaldo.

Because the FM/AC part does say that she's determined not to have Alastair get what he wants, and that does suggest she knows what it is he wants, right? So how does she get to be pissed off he never suggested he was discontented? And while she's right that what happened between him and Peter was without her consent, that would apply the same if they'd been as vanilla as anything, and what entitles her to think kink is despicable as such? Or sexist as such, for that matter ( ... )

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