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Cloud no. 9

Dec 30, 2010 07:56

1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real prompt, and commenting on that with your fill.)
3) Try not to get too srs business. ( Read more... )

prompting: 09

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Self-Prompt: Seven Sins anonymous January 10 2011, 13:17:31 UTC

It's a bit of a cliche in fanfic, but I don't think it's been done yet, so here's me sticking my fingers into all the pies.

I've speed-written 7 short bits of smut, all about 500 words, and each is based around a deadly sin with a different pairing. I know there's lots of much more detailed stories written more skillfully, but the idea is that this is an umbrella series rather than 7 separate stories. Oh, and possibly triggery.

Clameron, Brown/Whelan, TBGB, Burnballs, Mandelbell, Milicest, Mandelborne.

Fill: Lust, Clameron (1/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 13:20:11 UTC

It shouldn’t have happened. Both men were unquestionably heterosexual; both had brilliant wives and beautiful children. And yet, neither David nor Nick could deny that they had felt some kind of new spark deep in their guts as they sparred over the lecterns in the Rose Garden ( ... )

Re: Fill: Lust, Clameron (1/7) anonymous January 11 2011, 10:12:26 UTC

I'm really loving how conflicted they are between their lust and their consciences. Oh, you naughty boys! ;)

Fill: Gluttony, Brown/Whelan (2/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 13:21:58 UTC

Gordon stared down at the other man. He was sprawled unhappily on the foot of the bed, the mattress sinking around his weight. His arms were folded over his head, and crumbs surrounded him, bouncing across the covers and off the side of the bed. The buttons at the bottom of his shirt were pulled tight in their holes, and his stomach was taut and almost perfectly rounded ( ... )

Re: Fill: Gluttony, Brown/Whelan (2/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:05:45 UTC

UNF UNF UNF

Ahem. <3 This is perfectly done, disgustingly hot - force-feeding remains my #1 kink and I can't thank you enough. Gordon's so perfect for it!

Can I also say that I've been hoping for some kind of Seven Sins fic? :3 Good show, anon. I hope you'll be okay with separate comments for each part ~

Re: Fill: Gluttony, Brown/Whelan (2/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:33:28 UTC

Thank you! I loathe it more than just about anything else IRL (Imagine the most foul human being imaginable sitting across the room and describing in lewd detail their force-feeding/rape fantasies that involve you to a friend) but for some reason I like writing/reading it.

Re: Fill: Gluttony, Brown/Whelan (2/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:55:52 UTC

Not usually a pairing I like, and certainly not a kink of mine, but wow!

Re: Fill: Gluttony, Brown/Whelan (2/7) anonymous January 13 2011, 18:14:52 UTC

Seriously, no joke, you have found my fave pairing and fave kink.

Not many people like Charlie and not many people love reading force feeding, so for me to actually find a story is amazing, but to find a story AND it be so bloody well written is just......WOW!

Huge thanks, you've cheered me up from a really shitty day :)

Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 13:23:28 UTC

The two men left the Commons at twenty past eight, and hailed a taxi. Half an hour later, they were tumbling into Gordon’s bed, wrestling with unrestrained fury for dominance, Tony kicking and scratching while Gordon tried to pin down the wiry man under his bulk ( ... )

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:08:14 UTC

^^ Oh, boys. Why so uncooperative? It's fics like this that convince me they only fight because of the awesome sex. :D I adore the dialogue here as well, it's snippy and so good to read. <3

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:35:28 UTC

The budget thing came from The End of the Party. Someone was saying that GBro would refuse to show TB the budget until the night before, when it had already been printed, and TB was reduced to begging on his knees in front of senior advisors for a copy.

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 18:15:48 UTC

... This I want.

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:32:59 UTC

Loved this.

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:36:17 UTC

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 10 2011, 17:52:47 UTC

That is just ridiculously hot! I think I may need a cold shower now.

Re: Fill: Greed, TBGB (3/7) anonymous January 11 2011, 10:09:48 UTC

Why does consternated TB and domineering GBro make me so damn smiley, laughy, and HOT?
:D I love their banter here; and overall I'm highly impressed by the different emotions you've shown throughout this series. Bravo!

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