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Cloud no. 9

Dec 30, 2010 07:56

1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real prompt, and commenting on that with your fill.)
3) Try not to get too srs business. ( Read more... )

prompting: 09

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anonymous January 11 2011, 19:14:15 UTC

I've been playing with drabble-generators for a little while now, with very hilarious results indeed (some of which I'll post if any anon is interested in the lulz, although everyone should have a go themselves!) aaaand anyway..

I am constantly getting the phrase "kissed his erection innocently" - and my characters are 'David' and 'Nick'. So, please, please, any fic that can, in any way, incorpate either half of Clameron kissing the other's erection 'innocently'?

Fill 1/2 alice_eddington January 13 2011, 12:56:42 UTC

Thought I'd celebrate my new lolitics journal with a mini ClameronHe loved Nick’s cock ( ... )

Fill 2/2 alice_eddington January 13 2011, 12:58:22 UTC

The first time they had sex, proper sex that is, David had reacted rather the same where Nick’s cock was concerned. He had reached for it blindly, determined; wanting to prove a point to both Nick and himself. When it was over he had put his briefs back on so Nick would do the same, wanting to continue touching Nick but unsure of what to do with his cock once its purpose had been served ( ... )

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 13 2011, 14:03:46 UTC

Yeah... Should not have read that at the office. Hot and so beautiful, thanks for sharing.

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 13 2011, 14:09:23 UTC

OP here. Wow, that was so, so lovely. Thank you so much for filling, and doing so so very well. I encourage you to lend your talents to the meme in the form of more Clameron! :)

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 13 2011, 21:09:57 UTC

Fantastic, beautifully written and tastefully erotic. I hope you use your new lolitical journal to good effect by filling loads more Clameron prompts. :)

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 13 2011, 22:25:20 UTC

This is beautiful. You convey the love that Dave has for Nick so vividly, without ever pointing it out in so many words. This is subtle and intensely romantic as well as hot. How did you manage to delineate both men so precisely in so few words?

And such gorgeous English as well! I do hope you write more Clameron for us to sigh over!

When you mentioned Nick's 'sleep-rough voice' - guh. I melted into a little puddle of goo, right here! *fans self*

Thank you so much for sharing - can you tell that I loved this? *g*

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 13 2011, 22:51:02 UTC

*reads at least twice* Ooh. Hot. Sweet. Lovely :)

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 14 2011, 04:19:56 UTC

Hot and sweet. Very domestic in a way. I loved it!

Re: Fill 2/2 anonymous January 22 2011, 22:25:48 UTC

Oh, this was beautiful. I must declare my undying love for you dear writer because there simply aren't enough fics like this. I mean the kind of fic where, while there's technically sex, it focuses on the play of intimacy between the characters.

The part where you write DCam observing the hairs on Nick's forearms is so incredibly tender and erotic; I was basking in the imagery. This was better than porn.

Also the focus on the different details that make Nick masculine; the lips, the hair, muscle and broad shoulders is just lovely.

Thank you!

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