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Sep 27, 2011 10:28

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1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post
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2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first ( Read more... )

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anonymous November 11 2011, 21:54:20 UTC
Inspired by this: http://www.flickr.com/photos/whizz-kidz/6302062723/

Andy in a wheelchair (permanently or temporarily).

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Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (8/?) anonymous March 30 2012, 17:47:27 UTC
Having managed to procure a wheelchair and got a nurse to help him settle Andy in it, he takes firm charge of the handles, and steers Andy out into the sunshine. It is a glorious late autumn day, still unseasonably warm, and Ed hopes that the blue sky will lift Andy's mood. At least hayfever season is over, Andy having managed to miss the whole of it for once.

Andy, however, is grumpy at Ed's steering and, worse, natural control of the situation.

"Feck's sake, mate, can't you be gentler?" he grumbles.

"You could always learn to propel yourself, you know?" suggests Ed, who then bites his tongue at the potential faux pas he fears he might just have made ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (8/?) anonymous March 30 2012, 17:50:10 UTC
Aargh, that was only the latter half of that scene! *glares at C&P* This will hopefully be much more coherent when posted all in one to my LJ! REPOST about to follow.

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Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (8a/?) REPOST anonymous March 30 2012, 17:52:42 UTC
To Ed's great relief, it's a brighter Andy that greets him on his arrival. Today he's still in bed, but it's clear that he's been taken off the medication ( ... )

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Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (8b/?) REPOST anonymous March 30 2012, 17:55:50 UTC
(Character limit FTL!)Andy suppresses a smirk, a sight which causes Ed's heart to leap and makes him summon the strength to force himself back to a standing position ( ... )

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Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (9/?) anonymous March 30 2012, 21:02:33 UTC
Ed still can't bring himself to tell Andy how he feels, though, and his attempts at reciprocation are brutally batted away.

"You don't want to see ..."

"I do!"

"And I don't want you to see either," concludes Andy.

"It can't be that bad?" Ed, pleading, not an attractive look on him.

"It's ... I'm ..." Andy struggles to find the words.

Ed takes Andy's perfect slender hand in his own meatier one.

"Doesn't matter, mate. You take your time. I'll always be here for you."

He doesn't notice that Andy's shaking his head, and his whole body's shrinking away, back into the protective cocoon of the wheelchair. He doesn't notice that Andy's bottom lip is trembling, and that he's trying to still it by biting it - his usual trick to stop himself from bursting into tears - and that it's not working and that Andy's eyes are wet. Ed's wearing rose-tinted spectacles that have him seeing a world where Andy can come home to Yvette and him and the baby and everything can be worked outHe pushes Andy back to the hospital, feeling like he's ( ... )

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Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (10/?) anonymous March 31 2012, 00:21:56 UTC
Dear Ed and Yvette,

I know you'll be wondering why I'm writing to you rather than dealing with you face-to-face. Truth be told, I don't know that I'd have had the courage to say it to you if you were right there in front of me.

What we had was great, but it can never ever be the same again. Oh, some bits could, but the dynamic's changed and I'd always be reliant on you. And that's not what I want from lovers. But it's what any lover would have to do, so I've committed to celibacy from now on.

Also, I've made another decision. I can't live without a purpose, you both should know that better than anybody. It'll take time, but I imagine you'll hear how I'm doing eventually, when I've got everything together enough to make an impact.

(No, Ed, I'm not going to train to be a priest - not right now, anyway - just in case you're wondering.)

I'll always care about both of you, and wish you and your family all the best. I hope in time you'll come to feel the same for me.

Your Andy.

~~~
"We have to tell him," is Ed's immediate ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (10/?) anonymous March 31 2012, 23:23:18 UTC
Oh, this fic has a serious case of the Downtons (not that that's nessecarily a bad thing!) It's skipping so fast over time that it must be terrible for Andy not to have ever seen his kid. I hope this works out for them.

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Re: Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (10/?) anonymous March 31 2012, 23:45:19 UTC
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Hard to miss what you don't know about.

But, yes, I guess it's jumped the shark and is generally crap, so I'll just abandon it here.

Can't drag it out over the next 4-8 years it was intended to go without having to gloss over a lot (although since I've never watched Downton Abbey and don't intend to I'm merely insulted rather than massively insulted).

Well done. You've spoiled what little writing enjoyment I had; what little confidence I had in my own writing ability.

Mod: Please delete the lot, if you would be so kind?

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Re: Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (10/?) anonymous April 1 2012, 08:55:28 UTC
[DA] I don't want to get into some kind of slapfight here, but as a Downton watcher, I'd be chuffed if I was told my fic had a serious case of the Downtons. (I.e. narcotically addictive, with some dramatic time skipping.) I really don't see how time skipping is a negative observation when it's a perfectly sensible narrative tool. *shrug* I get that tone is hard to transmit on the interwebs, but I don't think it's unreasonable to assume good faith here.

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Re: Fill: Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again (10/?) anonymous April 1 2012, 09:56:24 UTC
I made the comment and I'm so sorry it came across like criticism! It wasn't - when I said "serious case of the Downtons" I meant it's fast paced and racing - but leaving delicious bits of "what? But what if??" which the reader has to think about.

I loved reading this fic and am so sad you're abandoning it. I wasn't critising you at all. I feel so bad that you thought I was.

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