Fic- Coming Up Tails, Part II

[lollipop_mania]

The Second Part of the Fanfic: Coming Up Tails

Title: Coming Up Tails
Warning: Adult Themes (Rated M)
Pairing: ShikaTema
Summary: Temari makes a sacrifice to protect her people and Shikamaru won't let her do it alone. He's willing to help her, whatever it takes.

Comments

[marajade116]

Great characterization and I like what you've done with the plot device - their reactions to the situation they've been placed in is very real and believable. Nice job!

One small note - you do realize women can only get pregnant 1 or 2 days out of an entire month - and that's supposing she is ovulating regularly... You definitely cannot get pregnant any time you have unprotected sex. I guess I was just confused that Temari seemed to be taking pregnancy tests daily - you have to wait at least two weeks after you ovulate to even take a pregnancy test so it wouldn't do her any good to hope for a positive the very next day - even presuming they did time her ovulation accurately.

[lollipop_mania]

Thank you!
And I did double check the ovulation thing, and a friend of mine who is an obgyn said that you're right, you usually get pregnant during the 24hrs or so OF ovulation, but because sperm lives in your body there is some 5-7 day window or something... and then afterwards you may still get pregnant, but the chances go WAY down and it is very very rare.

With the pregnancy test, yeah I know. But I figure with them being shinobi and medics, they have some sort of capability to find out if there is a change in the body pretty much as soon as it happens. I mean, that's totally just my imagination, but it works for the purposes of this fic and I figure is somewhat believable. (I've read it elsewhere too, so my creative license on that is relatively non-existent).
But again, thanks!

[twitchy_bunnies]

[lollipop_mania]

Oh thank you so much! That's really sweet! XD