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[lollipopy]

Title: Fated
Characters: Kanjani8, KAT-TUN, Domoto Koichi, Takizawa Hideaki, and other characters
Pairing: RyoJin(main) and other pairings that might come up.
Genre: comedy?
Summary: What happens when the Domoto family (which consisted of Kanjani8) are forced to live in Tokyo, and befriend the Takizawa family (which consisted of KAT-TUN)?

After about 20

Comments

[firehead41]

Aw, this seems very cute ^.^

But - this is my opinion and I don't hate you or am trying to be mean in any way, shape, or form! - the little sidenotes you have throughout the chapters, some refering to why you wrote that within the story, are kind-of...distracting. Your opinions should be put at the end in an author's note or something. I'm just saying they're distracting me from the story and I really like this story too! I am not trying to be mean at all - I swear! Please don't take me offensive, I'm really sorry if it sounds that way, but those sidenotes really distracted me for those 1st three chapters. They take away part of the creativeness of the story itself...

Sorry sorry sorry sorry! >.< Keep writing your ficlet though! I'm very excited to read more! I *hugs* it!

[lollipopy]

Thanks for pointing it out =) I don't take that offensively, really. I'll try to tkae away the side notes next time xD And thanks for reading my fic =)

[firehead41]

Phew *breathes in relief*

I always worry when I saw...things like that. I'm SO relieved you didn't take me the wrong way! Sankyuu for being understanding! *HUGS*

Can't wait for more of your ficcy!

[aka_theen]

wow you're fast ne?

i love jinjin in here, sooo cute...
kazuya is soo scary yet so overprotective...

waiting 4 the next one... ^^

[brighterlove]

awww this chapter was cute I love Bakanishi. I agree with you Jin's smile is gorgeous. Like it lights up his whole face.

OK RYo needs Anger Management Classes A.S.A.P cause clearly the Kid has got some issues.

OKay I am all for protective Kazu, but he need sto take it down a notch, Jin is older than him first of all. secondly like Jin said he has asthma not cancer and he is not fragile. Plus damn Kazu breaking up a Ryo/Jin moment

oooh love how they are developing feelings for each other. it's cute.

[sapphireyuuki13]

Cute cute cute XD!
What a super cute thing like this XD!
Oh i luv u so much XD! Cant wait to read the next chapter right now XD!

And i also love Kazu-chan like this too XD!

[nocikosora]

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