Fiction: Jacket Battle - The Fantasy

[lollobrigida]

Title: The Fantasy
Author: Lollobrigida
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack and Juliet
Rating: NC-17 (sex and hotness abounds - children go away!)
Prompt: Juliet's Home
Word Count: 4237
Notes: Third fiction for the Jacket Battle, and as you guessed, it just keeps getting longer and longer. (thats what she said) I own nothing, Lost isn't mine, please don't

Comments

[prettybutt]

"It would sting, and it would make me ache... and most times it made me bleed. I watched all that aggression all day long, then at night I let you unleash it onto me." WIN (i hope you don't mind commentary feedback..it helps me not forget the moments of pure brilliance).

FYI you write the sexiest Jack ever. Well next to Liz who is totally gonna lose the porn battle if she doesn't get movin' lol. The seductive teasing from Jack is sooo hot. I approve. The little details make your fic for me--the description of Jack going for it finally-the head tilt, slack jaw, and fuck-damn good stuff. "Jack, I don't mind... it just means you're really here." pwned..you pwn, this was great-can't wait for more..i'm gonna read the one before this again, then try and sleep in my new bed. sigh..at least my bedtime reading will be good. night sweetie-thanks for doing this-it is turning out awesome ♥

[lollobrigida]

Of course I don't mind commentary feedback! It helps me know which parts stick out the most.. besides Jack's cock HAAA!!

Heee, yeah Liz will catch up. She's got time, she's got time. Holidays are haggard though for everyone, I just happen to pretty much avoid them, so the smut helps me forget that I haven't wrapped anything and my bathroom still needs to be cleaned for tomorrow! HA!

I am still very glad you are enjoying, and remember this is allll because of you!!

[prettybutt]

I avoid them to see what you've done-best.excuse.EVER. All because of me huh, well I should stalk you more often..who knows what wonders I will encourage. Did you mention a cock?

[lollobrigida]

DAMN YOU LAURA!!! I have dial up so that thing you linked me to?? I will not be able to view it until TUESDAY when I am at work!! GAH!!! I shall use my vivid imaginer-ation to try and guess that it is Matthew Fox stroking it... HAA!! Okay maybe not... but GAH!! curses to my dial up!!

[ms_dollsome]

This was just entirely too long and porny.

NOT!

Oh man, talk about a nice present to wake up to Christmas Eve morning....I'm going to read it again just as soon as I leave this comment. I had to let you know that each story is getting better and better, and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one. (As are the rest of the battle observers, I'm sure.)

Also? This line:

"I'm not here... you've just wanted to feel it... to think of me right here, ready for you..."

Kills.

A cold shower is calling me I do believe.

[lollobrigida]

Heee!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I had the notion of it swimming around my head all day yesterday to the point where I got home and was like OKAY I so know EXACTLY what they are doing tonight! I don't think I've ever gotten *this* behind a ship before. I mean I'm pro Gibson/Grace so very much so... but he kinda died in the finale which pissed me off. So getting on the bandwagon this early into it and this deep? Yeah I'm a goner pretty much.

There was a point in the fiction where I was going to have her ask him how he knew what her dreams had done to her? The part where he tells her what they did to her? "You'd wake up... Juliet, skin flush and on fire, wondering why your dreams were betraying you like that." That part? Was going to go a bit further in having him admit that he had the same dreams? But I liked it better that he just knew her that well instead, and less romantic comedy of them. I did however totally steal the WORST line in a romantic comedy ever. (wow this comment reply is getting long!) There is a line in The Wedding

[ms_dollsome]

*nods* I enjoyed it immensely. And I know what you mean about getting so deep into a ship so early on. It's weird for me too, because usually I'm one of the last ones on the bandwagon and then *poof* the show gets canceled. (It's a pattern I hope is going to break with Jacket.)

And you know you're really into a ship when you download a widget that sits prettily on your desktop and lets you know anytime jacket_whoweare is updated. *cough*

I agree that it was better having him just know her that well, much more realistic of the characters. And I've seen The Wedding Date but I don't remember that line. Next time I catch it I'm going to have to pay close attention. :)

(This reply is also very long, but I blame you.)

Juliet and Jack catch up on Pop Culture Phenomenon.... and that is all I will say.
And I don't know you that well, so I'm hesitant to say this, but you're a tease!

*twiddles thumbs until the Pop Culture induced sex is posted*

[lollobrigida]

HAA oh dear I know the horrible torture of loving a show only to see it go off into the distance... Smith... The Inside.. now DayBreak.. which I only watched for Victoria Pratt.. but STILL!! They need to cut it out! Jacket should hopefully give me something good at least... or so I hope, and the beauty of this ship is that most the fans KNOW how insane it would be for this to end perfectly... it's not that whole insane banter about how Jate is Fate, which if i hear that one more time? I'm gonna start a Jate is Hate community... but Jacket is flawed and tormented and that's what we love about it... or at least that's what I love about it. It's about giving the characters their own choices, instead of saying OH well she's the lead female and he's the lead male so OF COURSE they belong together. I'm just glad JJ learned his lesson with Syd/Vaughn.. you don't put them together in the middle of the show because then they have nothing to struggle toward

[speedcat93]

Wow, so hot! and you killed me with that line "Juliet, show me,". I can totally imagine Jack saying such a thing. Freak control and big surgeon during the day and god of teasing at night LOL! I love when he's a bit agressive (but in a good way) he bit into her shoulder.Really liked that *hugs*

[lollobrigida]

Hee!! Thanks, yeah he's got a bit of an edge to him which I think is something he's always had but when he's around Kate he tries to be that "guy" and pfft who wants that!