Fiction: Jacket Battle - What You Lack

[lollobrigida]

Title: What You Lack
Author: Lollobrigida
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack and Juliet
Rating: NC-17 (sex and hotness abounds - children go away!)
Prompt: Quote from Helena Peabody on The L Word
Word Count: 7081
Notes: Fourth fiction for the Jacket Battle. I am winning Liz. I own nothing, Lost isn't mine, please don't sue me... entertainment only. I did

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[prettybutt]

Still as her shoulders shifted against the cold steel wall once more she felt her inner thighs clench involuntarily just to make sure that the low ache she had felt was real. The porn battle is giving me an low ache as well.

Bringing his mouth lower and into her neck he breathed hard and heavy onto her skin, "I won't do it though Juliet... I won't touch you. I'd sooner wrap my fingers around your neck and press until the skin between my thumb and index finger hurt against your windpipe than touch you the way you think your lacking."
OH MY FRIG!

He shut his eyes quickly trying to stop himself from being drawn into her, but the breath he took just filled his head with her even more. Without much thought his lips parted against her skin roughly, teeth nipping at her throat before they raked down to her shoulder.
these details are KILLING me softly---lovin' all of this!

The skilled hands of a surgeon worked their way between their bodies still taut against each other, slipping buttons loose as if they were simply stitches needing to

[lollobrigida]

-- "Nobody makes me wet like that," her words sounded hoarse with lust as she could feel Jack pressing along her, "You're the first person who's ever done that to me." You my friend win dirty talker of the year! --

HAA that was the prompt I used. It's from The L Word suggested by MsDollsome. I've used that line in similar fashions in other RP and Fic, but the direct line of speak-age is from The L Word. so no credit from me for that. the bits in between? yaa me. but the actual words are L Words.

HEEE I KNOW you have Jack!handfetish which is why I try to include his hands ALL ovah the place.

As for Jack hating her, yeah.. he bounced alll over the place in that one. It was like he loves to hate her or something. Re-reading it from the start I'm like woah .. what a progression for him HAA!!

[ms_dollsome]

huminaguhwuh....uh.

(It's 12:40 in the morning, I don't have the ability to articulately tell you how much I love this or how much I want to have your babies at this very moment. Jesus woman, you've rendered me practically speechless. Ask anyone, that's nearly impossible.)

I'm going to review this tomorrow with a lot more quoting and gushing. Right now I'm going to reread it and then pass out and (hopefully) have some very hot L Word/Lost crossover dreams. *crosses fingers*

[lollobrigida]

HEE omg... can you imagine.. Shane/Juliet?
Duuuude. Carmen/Kate....
Hmmm... HMMMM.... Dana/Shannon.....
Ooooh... Alice/Alex
HOMG... Jenny/Ana-Lucia!! HAA okay that one is a bit random...

maybe Jenny would be better for Shannon, and Dana could go for Ana... cause I am not thinking the carmen/ana thing... that won't work at all.

I sooo might have to write something now.. HMM I can see it now, a ficlet series.. the Olivia Cruise Line crashes... and the L Word girls turn all the females on the island GAY!!

[speedcat93]

Wow, love this so much! I LOVE Dom!Jack and I almost feel sorry for Juliet, almost... My fav. part of his dominance as a male that had just had his way with a woman but still, Jack remains Jack a twinge of guilt hit him. That was pure hotness. Thanks for sharing ;-)

[lollobrigida]

Thanks!! See I have big time empathy for Juliet especially when Jack is being so darn MEAN to her, but I guess she gets to have angsty angry hot sex, so she's fine with it.