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Fiction: Jacket Battle (sorta) - Just Like Me

Jan 02, 2007 22:52

Title: Just Like Me
Author: Lollobrigida
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack and Juliet
Timeline: This is a "What Could Have Happened" after the events of "I Do"
Rating: NC-17 (sex and hotness abounds - children go away!)
Prompt: "You know what you want and that makes you just like me" - Justin Timberlake 'FutureLoveSexSounds'
Word Count: 10086
Notes: So ( Read more... )

fiction - lost: jack/juliet

Comments 16

prettybutt January 3 2007, 12:50:01 UTC

the minute i get home sweetie-YEA!

lollobrigida January 4 2007, 00:30:02 UTC

GOOD. Where are you?? Don't you get off work at 6? It's 7my time.. 8 yours... Hmm maybe you worked late. or maybe you are reading it RIGHT NOW HOMG. probably the late work thing.

prettybutt January 4 2007, 01:19:40 UTC

reading right now! I get off my new job at 6, but had to help out at the animal clinic...except when i got there someone was already doing my job..then i got home and felt showering was the most important thing for everyone within a mile radius around me-now that those people are happy it's my turn. *muah..book report to follow shorty---although i like to read my porn nice and s-l-o-w ♥

lollobrigida January 4 2007, 02:04:39 UTC

Hee!! I got a yellow rose for my smut!! that is adorable! Thanks! I'll have to make a post talking about how smut got me an actual "Yellow Rose to pin on my nose" HAA!!

Yeah the emails I get with feedback on this one? they are like 120k a pop! i was like woah... thats a lotta smut.

Enjoy though! Read it nice and s-l-o-w. Jack seems to think Juliet likes it really FAST but that's him. HAA!!

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lady_e2484 January 3 2007, 19:50:58 UTC

WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was fucking amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Has to be one of if not the best sex scene i've ever read ............ it was so vivid !!!!!!!!!!

Well done hun xxxxxxxx

lollobrigida January 4 2007, 00:29:10 UTC

Thank you so much!!! I am really glad you enjoyed it!!

speedcat93 January 3 2007, 23:28:33 UTC

not being original here, but that was damn hot!my fav. line Jack knew though, that Juliet had let him be that guy, she accepted the flaws and the urges that even he couldn't just explain away.. Juliet seems to accept Jack as he is, and they just fit together. Thanks for sharing. Bye ;-)

lollobrigida January 4 2007, 00:28:35 UTC

Awww thanks!! I am glad you enjoyed it! Looking at it now I kinda wish I had split it up into sections, cause then I would be more inclined to keep writing more, but I fear that shoving it all in one post made it that much harder for me to write... so it's probably ended with this one. Who knows. I might do a second part to it at some point.

Thanks for reading and for the comment too!! I really appreciate it!

kilpaddy07 January 4 2007, 11:29:12 UTC

I really really loved this! And yeah to Laura4lad for encouraging you to continue because it was amzing!

I honestly cant quote my fav parts as I would be just copying and pasting you whole fic! The sex wa just guh! Everything leading up to it was brilliant.

Its so how I imagine Juliet to be - misunderstood.

I was secretly wishing you would continue to the "morning after" talk between them on deck :D

Please keep writing, you rock! And that god you love Jacket just as much as I do.

x

kilpaddy07 January 4 2007, 11:32:26 UTC

^ sorry about the lazy spelling mistakes there, I have my little sis on one arm while typing with my spare hand lol!

Forgot to mention that I think my fav part was then on the ship before the sex and obviously during it! I love it when Juliet gets all shy and shows her emotions.

Your are so talented!