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[lolz_loser]

                Yes, he’s a jerk. Less now then he was before he left. He’s cautious around me now, trying to prove that he won’t leave me. I wish I could say that I believe him, and its okay to treat me like I’m not made of spun sugar but honestly, it still frightens me, the thought of him leaving.

Regardless, he’s still a jerk.

Comments

[sataldajamahel]

wow.
that was really really hot.
also a fantastic idea.
thanks for posting!

[sataldajamahel]

you're welcome! I'm glad that you liked it =]

[lolz_loser]

ah well, that was me.

[kjcharmed]

That was brilliant. Was most definately a great idea. Well done, you wrote it so well. Thanks very much :)

[lolz_loser]

aw thank you =]

[qn_maleficent]

very enjoyable. well written, and pretty darn in-character for the nc-17 rating. hope to see you write more like this. :D

[lolz_loser]

ah I appreciate that! It's hard to keep them in character and talk so graphically about sex. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D

[cassiakohn]

Loved it! I don't normally like these type of setups but this time it was a major hit. Great job!

[lolz_loser]

haha thank you! I'm just coming onto the twilight scene, and usually I like to make it a little more scandalous, but I thought this was a good idea for a first time fic. I'm really, really glad you enjoyed it!

[onebrightgirl]

This was excellent butttt:

“I can’t stand it much longer Bells, I just can’t.” He licks the underside of my jaw and it feels as if someone dragged an ice cube across my flesh. I’m tempted to play dumb, but I know it’s not my blood as much as my body that’s fueling this conversation.

I think Bells is more of Jacob name for her, I can't imagine Edward ever calling her that.