House Of The Rising Sun Ch.2

[lolz_loser]

Edward’s perspective.

Comments

[tatertot086]

Please keep writing. I am enjoying this story very much =)

[lolz_loser]

I'm glad you like it! More is coming soon =]

[lori2lyn]

I luv the story. And i'm glad you're keeping Jacob with Nessie. I also think it's funny how Edward reacted to what Nessie was wearing the first day so i hope to read more about him acting like an overprotective dad. I think it's funny!!!

[lolz_loser]

I'm interested in where it's going too! I'm just kind of making it up as I go along, so far so good =] Thank you for reading, there will definitely be more!

[mastaspammip]

yay this is really good! I like the way nessie is portrayed like she is still learning things and growing up.. in a lot of stories she is automatically a grown up and knows everything and I like it better this way!

[lolz_loser]

Thank you =]

[minto_candy]

awww!!! This is breathtaking!!!!
Not only the story itself, but ur writing style as well are really inpressive!
Please, keep it going!
Don't blame Edward) He's part was marvelous))) Or mayb I'm just a little too obsessed w? Edward))
Renesmee's perspective is a brilliant idea, though we can't be much into Bella/Edward relation than... and none of us seem to get enough. But still I like. Just keep on switchimg from one perspective to another from time to time$)
And I think @carrying awaywith details! i GOOD thing!!! It make the story vivid!!
And about Jacob/Renesmee relations... it feels like it's smth that is ought to be kept, but I'd rather it was not the love of her life... yeah, I'm not team Jacob(><)

[lolz_loser]

I am not at all team Jacob either! But I kind of like where this is going. It is most definitly Edward/Bella, I'll try and work some steamy stuff in there =p

Re: Great Fic! ;)

[lolz_loser]

I'm glad you like it, I'm writing more as we speak =]