Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter 22 of 'Building With Worn-Out Tools'- Draco's Performance

lomonaaeren

Chapter 22 of 'Building With Worn-Out Tools'- Draco's Performance

Jul 10, 2007 08:18

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megyal July 10 2007, 12:37:10 UTC

God I wish I didn't have to go on-site, so I can read this more than once....

lomonaaeren July 11 2007, 01:39:02 UTC

Thank you! I like it when the story causes people to reread. :)

megyal July 11 2007, 03:08:48 UTC

Oh yes.I thoroughly enjoyed myself. I love the part with Harry's eyes at the end. I feel such a pull of anticipation.

melmoe1 July 10 2007, 14:02:49 UTC

Ahhh! Ginny has a conscience, not a very strong one, but it is there.

Harry's little vomiting episode was brilliant, had me fooled.

This has been such an edge of my seat story, I can't imagine it to be more so, yet here I am with my bum barley in the chair and my eyes wide, reading yet another fabulous chapter.

lomonaaeren July 11 2007, 01:39:40 UTC

Yes. There comes a point at which she gets disgusted- or at least afraid for her own life and her child's life.

I thought about making the vomiting episode real at first, but really, no one at the table had a reason to poison him.

And thanks!

spae July 10 2007, 16:23:20 UTC

oh exciting! *waits on edge of seat*

lomonaaeren July 11 2007, 01:39:48 UTC

Thanks!

nomeci July 10 2007, 17:48:52 UTC

wow - I had missed these last couple chapters... well I hadnt missed them, I just hadnt been on LJ to read them... I am loving this and can not wait for the next chapter!

lomonaaeren July 11 2007, 01:39:57 UTC

Thank you!

princeofblood July 10 2007, 18:42:53 UTC

First of all, I'm loving this story just as much as A Year's Temptation.
This chapter especially, I'm glad that you had Ginny grow a bit of a concience. I mean, I'm am NOT a Ginny fan, and so far you've been making Ginny out to be the "wicked witch", but I'm glad that there's only so far that Ginny will go with her selfishness, which gives another layer to her character that I wasn't sure we were going to see in this story.
Loving it, and waiting for the next chapter anxiously!

lomonaaeren July 11 2007, 01:41:02 UTC

Thanks! It's good to know that someone might like both stories. :)

Yes- only so far. I do think that, as represented here, she's pretty selfish, but Blaise has changed his attitude, and it's easy to imagine that she once again imagined something about a potential lover that didn't fit the reality.