I just wish Draco wasn't the bottom but since I haven't read anything that makes him bottom, I will continue reading until the sex scenes comes ^_^ then I will skip that and continue
hahaa....oh scorpius is so precious...who cares about daddy and big dwarf man fighting when you can have sweets and treacle tart NOW?!? hahah.... lovely chapter as always...only scorpius will think that sweets are more important...and scorpious i agree with you!!!!! :D
I just want to scoop Scorpius up and keep him forever. He is beyond awesome, with his comments and confessions, and knowing what is really important, dessert. Oh and the adults are ok too XD
wow. i am a little bit speechless. this was just so brilliantly affecting, my heart's still squeezing in my chest. so many complex emotional layers i don't even know where to start
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Thank you! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story so much.
That's at least one thing Draco's succeeded at: raising his son without the same loss of innocence that Lucius's raising seems to have entailed for him. And I'm glad you're enjoying him. I was pondering how to have involved in the story as something more than a mere passive object; it looks like the way I chose is working.
Draco's viewpoint is sympathetic, I think, because he's so little capable of sympathy himself at the moment. I think most people can remember a point in their lives when they've acted like that.
I think that because I understand Harry better than I understand Draco at the moment, I'm spending less time in his viewpoint than I might. I'll try to correct that in the next chapter. Really, the only reason he's so aware of his scars at the moment is because of Draco; in his ordinary life, he does manage to ignore them some of the time.
I think that because I understand Harry better than I understand Draco at the moment, I'm spending less time in his viewpoint than I might. I'll try to correct that in the next chapter.
oh no, that wasn't meant as a criticism at all!!! i think i'm just so fascinated with draco's view of harry at the moment, i'm seeing things more from his pov.
plus, i imagine i've read enough of your work by now that you know i like to over-theorize everything. :P
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Great job.
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I just wish Draco wasn't the bottom but since I haven't read anything that makes him bottom, I will continue reading until the sex scenes comes ^_^ then I will skip that and continue
Please update soon.
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There will be only one sex scene, and that near the end of the story. If that's a comfort. :)
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lovely chapter as always...only scorpius will think that sweets are more important...and scorpious i agree with you!!!!! :D
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Scorpius will have some interesting things to say to his father next chapter.
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Oh and the adults are ok too XD
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That's at least one thing Draco's succeeded at: raising his son without the same loss of innocence that Lucius's raising seems to have entailed for him. And I'm glad you're enjoying him. I was pondering how to have involved in the story as something more than a mere passive object; it looks like the way I chose is working.
Draco's viewpoint is sympathetic, I think, because he's so little capable of sympathy himself at the moment. I think most people can remember a point in their lives when they've acted like that.
I think that because I understand Harry better than I understand Draco at the moment, I'm spending less time in his viewpoint than I might. I'll try to correct that in the next chapter. Really, the only reason he's so aware of his scars at the moment is because of Draco; in his ordinary life, he does manage to ignore them some of the time.
And thank you again!
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oh no, that wasn't meant as a criticism at all!!! i think i'm just so fascinated with draco's view of harry at the moment, i'm seeing things more from his pov.
plus, i imagine i've read enough of your work by now that you know i like to over-theorize everything. :P
the story is fantastic, i completely loving it!!!
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