Hmm. I liked it better when Scorpius was naturally precocious rather than precocious due to a spell- it was the child-like comments that were amusing.
I don't know if you plan to make Harry's scars unhealable, or to restore him to his former countenance, but the story as you've written it has enough world-building put into it, that either way, the story is fascinating.
I can understand that feeling, but I think I made him too precocious- and then I wanted to explain that and have it fit into the story. And having Draco deliberately seek to make his son perfect does fit in with the story's themes.
I love the clarity with which Scorpius speaks to his father, as well as Draco's blindness and self-centered behavior towards Harry. I am sad that Scorpius is smart because of a spell, but he's still amazing and cute!
And I feel bad for Harry, that he took the commission even though his friends said not to and he regrets it.
I'm very much looking forward to an update! Love this story to pieces!
Thank you! Really, you can blame Draco for Scorpius being smart because of a spell. He thought there was no way that he could take a chance on Scorpius being "ordinary."
I finally decided to read this story and I am glad i did. I love it! It is sad to see this happen to Harry and Draco but I can't wai to see where you take us ^^.
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I don't know if you plan to make Harry's scars unhealable, or to restore him to his former countenance, but the story as you've written it has enough world-building put into it, that either way, the story is fascinating.
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And thank you.
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And I feel bad for Harry, that he took the commission even though his friends said not to and he regrets it.
I'm very much looking forward to an update! Love this story to pieces!
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And thanks for reviewing.
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This story seems to be more about pain than most of my others.
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I can promise at least a relatively happy ending.
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