Chapter Five of 'Hephaestus'- Lamentable

[lomonaaeren]

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[ayurubie]

aw sh*t.

[ayurubie]

How could anyone, even a wretched magical creature, not notice the small version of perfection near them?

this line really broke my heart..

i imagined that the fic will progress wherein draco will finally accept harry for his deformity and they will have a heartbreaking sex scene..

scorpius being deformed had gone waaaay beyond my expectations..

[lomonaaeren]

It wasn't in my original plan for the story, either. I hope you find that it works out.

[lomonaaeren]

Yes.

[nimue_8]

This is amazing. I hope little Scorpius' situation improves.

I love how nuanced are your characters.

I adore strong and honest Harry.

"I just wish someone could be strong for me."

Aaw! *Wants to hug him* I hope his wish gets granted.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

Hopefully, both your wishes will be granted.

[darkblueglitter]

This must have been the event you alluded to in your comment to me after the last chapter! Wow. I did not expect this! Poor Scorpious!

[lomonaaeren]

Yes. I thought about scarring Draco, but I think his reaction would be different then, since of course he would seek treatment without hesitation and he would think Harry should do the same thing. It's different when it's Scorpius and someone who partially got in trouble because of Draco's using magic on him to make him smarter and more curious.

[beatnikspinster]

Poor Scorpius! My heart just broke. Good chapter!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[seedless_acorn]

*DIES*

SCORPIUS!! NOOOO!!!

Oh Lomonaaeren! Why must you stab this poor reader through the heart! Poor poor Scorpius!!

on another note entirely...the line "Ron’s eyes widened until Harry thought, if he looked into them hard enough, he would be able to see Ron’s brain at the bottom of them." Is FANTASTIC! *applauds!!*

[lomonaaeren]

Because I'm evil like that? But sorry. It was meant to be emotional for the reader, though, and seems to have succeeded.

And thank you!