I don't know who to feel sorriest for! I'm thinking that what healing takes place will all be tangled together: Scorpius, Harry, and Harry's and Draco's relationship.
At this point, it's hard to see how it couldn't. Both Harry and Draco have been forced to confront the fact that they're passionate about each other, and Harry likes Scorpius too much to just walk away.
I just found and read this fic, and I really liked it. I liked the way you made harry, afraid to hope to be normal again, and how you made Draco, ignoring everything that isn't the way he likes. I really hope that Scorpios will be fine.
The only thing bothering me a bit is the Harry changes him mind so easily, Harry is a very stubborn person, in your fic and in the book, and even though he still loves Draco and hopes everything will be back to normal, I don't think that he would change his mind about Draco in one night. He would have accepted Draco's offer sooner or later, but not before Draco nagged him for at least a few days.
Anyway, I'm waiting to see what will happen next ^_^
I think Draco would be a very hard person to change, because in the books he really does ignore a lot of chances to not do stupid shit. (He joins Umbridge's Inquisitorial Squad when he must have seen that she wouldn't last long, for example. And if he didn't see that she wouldn't last, that's yet another problem). Only when he's got choices pressing in on him from all sides and he stands to lose something else if he doesn't comply will he change.
Harry sees his change of heart as an ultimatum. He wants one more chance because he thinks it was his fault (partially) for walking away years ago. (You may have noticed that he refers to it as "the time I walked away from Draco" more than "the time Draco broke up with me"). But if Draco refuses to accept him unconditionally no matter what the healing spells they find, then Harry will walk away with a clear conscience.
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I liked the way you made harry, afraid to hope to be normal again, and how you made Draco, ignoring everything that isn't the way he likes.
I really hope that Scorpios will be fine.
The only thing bothering me a bit is the Harry changes him mind so easily, Harry is a very stubborn person, in your fic and in the book, and even though he still loves Draco and hopes everything will be back to normal, I don't think that he would change his mind about Draco in one night. He would have accepted Draco's offer sooner or later, but not before Draco nagged him for at least a few days.
Anyway, I'm waiting to see what will happen next ^_^
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I think Draco would be a very hard person to change, because in the books he really does ignore a lot of chances to not do stupid shit. (He joins Umbridge's Inquisitorial Squad when he must have seen that she wouldn't last long, for example. And if he didn't see that she wouldn't last, that's yet another problem). Only when he's got choices pressing in on him from all sides and he stands to lose something else if he doesn't comply will he change.
Harry sees his change of heart as an ultimatum. He wants one more chance because he thinks it was his fault (partially) for walking away years ago. (You may have noticed that he refers to it as "the time I walked away from Draco" more than "the time Draco broke up with me"). But if Draco refuses to accept him unconditionally no matter what the healing spells they find, then Harry will walk away with a clear conscience.
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