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tray_la_la December 5 2008, 01:47:56 UTC
fjdkslfjdksl!!!!!!!!!! such a great ending!!!!

so many things i loved! draco scolding harry about his leg and hauling him off to bed, draco watching him sleep and giving him a kiss, FLIRTY!DRACO OMG ! and his proposition? *dies* so hot! the sex was wonderfully hot, and i really liked the imperfectness of it. draco saying he had learned to read expressions on harry's face was just so sweet.

but i think my favorite bit was the very end. scorpius is the cutest ever-i absolutely adore him! it was such a perfect scene, especially draco's reaction to waking up to harry. that shy smile of determination completely warmed my heart. i love how hopeful this story is, and how you didn't tie off every last thread and slap a pretty bow on it. things will still be tough, and the progress they've made was hard won, but it's so much more genuine for it.

thank you so, so much for this amazing story!!!! ♥

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lunasky3 December 5 2008, 02:25:33 UTC
you said everything I was about to!! *shakes fist* But seriously. Ditto to the MAX! So much love!!!

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lomonaaeren December 7 2008, 21:19:08 UTC
Thank you!

I wanted Draco to tend to Harry's leg as a partial acknowledgment of Harry's wish that he thought someone should be strong for him.

I think their first time had to be imperfect. They've been through too much, even now, to understand each other without some barriers in the way.

I really did want, in a way, to tie up the story and show them living happily ever after, but I couldn't think of a way to do that and still keep it short. I'm very glad you like it, and glad you let me do it for you!

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ayurubie December 5 2008, 02:34:21 UTC
from all H/C fic that ive read this is the best!

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lomonaaeren December 7 2008, 22:17:55 UTC
Thank you!

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valkyrie17 December 5 2008, 02:55:49 UTC
A lovely ending (even the doxie)

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lomonaaeren December 7 2008, 22:18:11 UTC
Thank you!

(I suspect Harry and Draco do not share that last opinion).

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yanagi_wa December 5 2008, 03:32:24 UTC
Wonderful ending. I really like this story. Great work. (Sorry it's over but the pacing was great too.)

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lomonaaeren December 7 2008, 22:18:22 UTC
Thank you!

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anonymous December 5 2008, 03:59:01 UTC
Lucy?

Like Lucius, by any chance?

Also:

"He writhed around on top of Draco like a perfect demon of elbows" made me smile.

Also, a wonderful ending. :) Thank you.

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lomonaaeren December 7 2008, 22:18:48 UTC
Thank you!

And though Lucius would no doubt be displeased by it, this is his grandson's tribute to him. :)

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