Chapter 32 of 'Building With Worn-Out Tools'- A Whirlwind of Consequences

Jul 18, 2007 15:19

Just one more chapter after this one, which will be up tomorrow.

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stereosymbiosis July 18 2007, 19:31:27 UTC
Oh boy, I loved that little bit in the bookshop! I can't believe there's only one chapter left. I can't wait to read it tomorrow.

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lomonaaeren July 18 2007, 19:39:35 UTC
Thanks! I enjoyed the chance to show a small slice of the general public reacting to Harry and Draco's relationship.

The ending of the story sort of startled me, too- but I actually thought it would be shorter.

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megyal July 18 2007, 19:32:15 UTC
*is delighted*

*and is now sad. This series will now end!*

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lomonaaeren July 18 2007, 19:40:30 UTC
Thank you!

This series will now end!*

Maybe, maybe not. This story, definitely, but (un)fortunately there are loose ends dangling which I didn't really mean to be so dangly, and which could become a sequel...

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raphsody606 July 18 2007, 21:40:07 UTC
SEQUEL!!!!

*runs around waving hands happily*

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lomonaaeren July 19 2007, 00:50:17 UTC
Maybe. As I said, I left loose ends, but I have to figure out what to do with them first! :)

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ravenqueen55 July 18 2007, 21:48:39 UTC
So much to love here, too!

~ Well, all right, that was as much news to him as it was to her, but she didn’t need to know that. (So funny...but good to see Harry roll with the punches!)

And then the line following it:

~ “And he’s far more than just a body. You can think that you turned me gay, if you like, but the truth is that I finally found someone really attractive to me.” (Take THAT, Ginny Weasley!!! *cackles madly*)

And this wonderful declaration from Harry:

~ “He only showed me what should have been obvious already. And then he fought for me where no one else would have, and overcame old prejudices to give me a chance, and allowed me to fight for him. The only thing you really need to know about all that, though, is that I’m very happy in his company.”
(*dabs eyes*)

Loved Mrs. Zabini, too ~ she's a treat!!! And Narcissa was delightful ~ I loved how Harry reacted to her approval. Now....Draco's seduction...

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lomonaaeren July 19 2007, 00:51:48 UTC
Thank you!

I thought Harry's revelation that he was in love/is in love with Draco would probably be sudden; his emotional growth in the story was, after all, coming in bursts rather than proceeding smoothly.

Draco's seduction is indeed the next chapter. :)

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syrinx59 July 18 2007, 22:20:41 UTC
Oh, I support the sequel idea... the story is excellently set and the characters are well developed... I think you should continue it, it's a great idea...
and I love the Narcissa's respond, even though she's not really sane in your story is very much the Narcissa from books I've always imagined... :):)

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lomonaaeren July 19 2007, 00:52:11 UTC
Thank you! If I can think of a plot, I definitely plan to do this now.

Hee, that's interesting. Thanks!

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arinad_kitten July 16 2009, 18:31:37 UTC
*joins people in the growing SEQUEL corner, and starts to hand out tea and coffee*

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lomonaaeren July 19 2007, 00:52:20 UTC
Thank you!

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