Maybe, maybe not. This story, definitely, but (un)fortunately there are loose ends dangling which I didn't really mean to be so dangly, and which could become a sequel...
~ Well, all right, that was as much news to him as it was to her, but she didn’t need to know that. (So funny...but good to see Harry roll with the punches!)
And then the line following it:
~ “And he’s far more than just a body. You can think that you turned me gay, if you like, but the truth is that I finally found someone really attractive to me.” (Take THAT, Ginny Weasley!!! *cackles madly*)
And this wonderful declaration from Harry:
~ “He only showed me what should have been obvious already. And then he fought for me where no one else would have, and overcame old prejudices to give me a chance, and allowed me to fight for him. The only thing you really need to know about all that, though, is that I’m very happy in his company.” (*dabs eyes*)
Loved Mrs. Zabini, too ~ she's a treat!!! And Narcissa was delightful ~ I loved how Harry reacted to her approval. Now....Draco's seduction...
I thought Harry's revelation that he was in love/is in love with Draco would probably be sudden; his emotional growth in the story was, after all, coming in bursts rather than proceeding smoothly.
Oh, I support the sequel idea... the story is excellently set and the characters are well developed... I think you should continue it, it's a great idea... and I love the Narcissa's respond, even though she's not really sane in your story is very much the Narcissa from books I've always imagined... :):)
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The ending of the story sort of startled me, too- but I actually thought it would be shorter.
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*and is now sad. This series will now end!*
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This series will now end!*
Maybe, maybe not. This story, definitely, but (un)fortunately there are loose ends dangling which I didn't really mean to be so dangly, and which could become a sequel...
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*runs around waving hands happily*
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~ Well, all right, that was as much news to him as it was to her, but she didn’t need to know that. (So funny...but good to see Harry roll with the punches!)
And then the line following it:
~ “And he’s far more than just a body. You can think that you turned me gay, if you like, but the truth is that I finally found someone really attractive to me.” (Take THAT, Ginny Weasley!!! *cackles madly*)
And this wonderful declaration from Harry:
~ “He only showed me what should have been obvious already. And then he fought for me where no one else would have, and overcame old prejudices to give me a chance, and allowed me to fight for him. The only thing you really need to know about all that, though, is that I’m very happy in his company.”
(*dabs eyes*)
Loved Mrs. Zabini, too ~ she's a treat!!! And Narcissa was delightful ~ I loved how Harry reacted to her approval. Now....Draco's seduction...
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I thought Harry's revelation that he was in love/is in love with Draco would probably be sudden; his emotional growth in the story was, after all, coming in bursts rather than proceeding smoothly.
Draco's seduction is indeed the next chapter. :)
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and I love the Narcissa's respond, even though she's not really sane in your story is very much the Narcissa from books I've always imagined... :):)
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Hee, that's interesting. Thanks!
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