Chapter One of 'Incandescence'- Irresistible Force

[lomonaaeren]

Title: Incandescence
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Warnings: Angst, profanity, manipulation. Takes place fairly far in the future after DH, but ignores the epilogue.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione, Luna/Neville, Lucius/Narcissa.
Summary: Draco has

Comments

[franalan]

Oooh now this looks interesting :)
I don't think Draco has a clue what he's getting himself into though...

[hitsuzen_hime]

Ohh I agree, but he's going to find out (and we get to watch!) Ohh so excited!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

And no, probably not.

[xelloss_poo]

Oooooo. ^^ But will things go the way Draco wants? Of course not. XD LOL I look forward to the shinanegans that await! :D

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[duchessa]

Completely random but eee! You have Lucius/Narcissa! I kind of miss them, after 'unconquerable soul'.
I also love the different sorts of writers you showed us and how there's abit of competition going on. This Draco hasn't pinged me yet, and we haven't seen much of Harry, but I'm already very curious to what Harry would do. I ...don't think he's going to make it easy. XD

[lomonaaeren]

Yes. Draco has a relationship of mutual tolerance with his parents in this one. :)

And thanks! This story is all in Draco's POV, so I think his character will come through more strongly in the next chapter, especially when he starts formulating story ideas.

[brknhalo241]

Oy! Still rubbing my wrists from the manacles of Inter Vivos and now I just heard the soft clink of them being placed right back on me. That's okay. If I'm going to be enslaved to a story then I'm happy that it's one of yours.

I kept wondering, as Draco mused, just how much of how he feels about his work comes from your own love of writing. This one has my attention because I see that each man shows remnants of the boys they used to be but they've also grown into men that I'm extremely curious to get to know.

*waving handcuffs* Keep on going!!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

I am using a lot of the metaphors and thoughts that regularly pass through my head when I write, though my method of composition is rather different from Draco's. :)

One thing I think I'll enjoy about this story is the chance to write a more mature Harry and Draco than usual.

[lilliant]

Oh I really loved reading this. Draco is really in for a challenge. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!