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franalan June 28 2009, 18:59:29 UTC
“You’re stupid. Brave, but stupid.” I was waiting for the ravaging....

And, ooh the plot thickens! I'm worried that there is some hidden side effect of the ink though...

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hogwartshoney June 28 2009, 20:54:00 UTC
“You’re stupid. Brave, but stupid.” I was waiting for the ravaging....

Me TOO !!!! LOL.

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lomonaaeren June 30 2009, 00:03:19 UTC
Sorry, too early for that yet!

And you don't have to worry about the ink. The Healers really did clean it all out of Draco's eyes.

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nonajf June 28 2009, 19:21:15 UTC
Draco is learning. I'm looking forward to them working together. Who knows, Draco may still end up with a book, just not part of his series.

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lomonaaeren June 30 2009, 00:04:06 UTC
Thank you!

The question of whether he will write a book at all becomes very interesting in a few chapters, I think.

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hogwartshoney June 28 2009, 20:59:50 UTC
THIS... was another one of those brilliant chapters in which you completely captivated me! The Labyrinth is superb - a great bit of imagination and magic.

I was actually drinking cold water when I happened upon Draco seized the glass and drank the water off at one gulp, though as always Cassidy kept it cold enough to kill a shark. and I laughed out LOUD! That's a priceless line!!!

Am intrigued by the Hideous Hopfrog, amused by Justice and his willingness to go where the owl treats are, by Draco's manipulations and by Harry's dramatic entrance.

Moar !

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lomonaaeren June 30 2009, 00:04:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm proud of the Labyrinth and the other writers. I like introducing the magical background of the wizarding writers' community.

The next chapter should be up in a few days.

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lomonaaeren June 30 2009, 00:05:16 UTC
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this chapter.

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nightshadow_t2 June 29 2009, 06:02:09 UTC
Ink as a weapon? Marvelous idea! I have never, ever seen that in any story. Poisoned paper, yes. Weaponized Ink, no. I love surprises. ^_^

I'm rather enjoying this though. I like the fact is from Draco's point of view. It's nice to see his first. I find his understanding of Harry rather astute. And I take back the comment about my cat being like Swanfaire. She is soooo much more like Cassidy. ^_^ Will Cassidy get to play a bigger part? I love the Labyrinth and really wish one existed. Reminds me somewhat of the movie named such. And is there the possibility of a sequel from Harry's POV?

And now I suppose we'll get a bit more interaction between the two? Draco staring and Harry finally saying something and berating him as a thank you. Wonderful, wonderful.

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lomonaaeren June 30 2009, 00:06:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm afraid that's my horrid imagination working overtime again.

Draco's POV will be for the entirety of this story. As for a sequel from Harry's POV, interesting idea, but I'd have to think about it.

I'm not sure if Cassidy or the Labyrinth will show up again.

And yes, the next chapter is one long conversation between Harry and Draco.

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nightshadow_t2 July 2 2009, 06:18:34 UTC
Horrid imaginations brew the best things. I was supposed to be getting a MA and mine went and created a "what if" world where Dragons exist in today's modern society and then inserted various fandoms into aspects of its history. Go Lit Crit! I so could not tell you a single journal I read. I loved The Faerie Queene though. ^_^

Oh? Sequel Plot bunny? *builds it a nest and assigns Luna Morte to watch it* She's a good nest tender, but not so much an idea bouncer. Tends to make her dragonliness a bit snarly. I'm good for bouncing ideas off of though. Or just enjoying them once they hatch and grow. :)

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