Chapter Nine of 'Incadescence'- Illusion

[lomonaaeren]

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[daftfear]

Oh noooooooooo! Where is Harry? He must find them! Ohhh this woman is very unpleasant if not very fascinating, lol. Argh I want to know more! Seriously. Mrrrh *hops in anticipation*

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! The next chapter should be up in a few days.

[lunasky3]

I love your evil character! :D

[lomonaaeren]

Thanks!

[ura_hd]

Nice twist! Where is Harry?

[lomonaaeren]

Thanks!

And you find that out next chapter.

[allycat_aria]

I agree with la mariane. Yolanda is scary like Daphne from Intellectual Love Affair. I'm rather looking forward to it *grin*. Not that I want to see Draco hurt, but it's such an interesting twist.

You tease! You never intended for the bet to be carried through (although I guess Harry won).

The interaction between Yolanda and Draco are really interesting. I almost wonder if Draco will stop "living in a story" quite so much once this ordeal is over.

I can't wait to see where this is going next!!

This must be your week for cliffhangers huh?

[lomonaaeren]

Well, I can promise you that this period of hurting Draco doesn't last as long as the torment in An Intellectual Love Affair did.

Draco has a different interpretation of the bet in the next chapter.

And thank you! As for cliffhangers, I guess so; I honestly tend to think of my stories in isolation, so I didn't realize until I'd posted this one that two chapters at once ended in cliffhangers.

[cassie_black12]

Yikes!! That's not good. Fingers crossed that Harry's still got that 'saving people' thing!

[lomonaaeren]

He definitely does; it's one of the things that makes him a good Auror. Of course, first he has to know that Draco's in trouble...