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lomonaaeren

Chapter Ten of 'Incandescence'- Inspiration

Jul 13, 2009 09:20

rated pg or pg-13, humor, novel-length, harry/draco, mystery, angst, unusual career!draco, pov: draco, auror!fic, incandescence, romance, ewe

Comments 27

franalan July 13 2009, 13:30:19 UTC

Oooh that's a twist!

And I wonder what the spell will say about the bet...

lomonaaeren July 15 2009, 22:56:55 UTC

Thank you!

Mostly, it's what Draco suspected: the spell considers the bet canceled since its terms couldn't be fulfilled.

kelahnus_24 July 13 2009, 13:52:16 UTC

This was so cool. I understand that it is messed up for Harry to see and be able to do this things, but people make their own fates and Yolanda made her own. Loved it

lomonaaeren July 15 2009, 22:57:14 UTC

Thank you!

Harry, of course, will wonder if Yolanda really made her own fate or if he murdered her...

daftfear July 13 2009, 14:09:01 UTC

GAHHH! OMG THANK GOODNESS. I'm so glad she is DEAD. Yes, TAKE HER AWAY shadow people! She assaulted Draco with his own memories and that is just VILE. Whole new way to 'use your thoughts against you', no? Ooo I can't wait for the next chapter. DX But it's almost over! This is both good and bad. I must know the end and yet I don't want it to stop, lol.

...that was a lot of rambling. Sorry ^_^;

lomonaaeren July 15 2009, 22:57:47 UTC

Thank you!

Yolanda was undoubtedly vile, especially because she didn't really think anything she did was wrong as long as she did it for her art, but I kind of liked her.

And Harry has a big problem with what he's done here. Of course.

hogwartshoney July 13 2009, 14:34:15 UTC

Excellent! This had a bit of Ghost-meets-Dead-Like-Me feel to it, but oh so much more sinister!

allycat_aria July 13 2009, 20:58:50 UTC

I agree. I could see Gravelings right at home in this world.

lomonaaeren July 15 2009, 22:57:56 UTC

Thank you!

lala4889 July 13 2009, 14:37:09 UTC

I love this story. A hard chapter for our guys, but things are looking up. Harry is going to talk with Draco...YAY!!!

lomonaaeren July 15 2009, 22:58:08 UTC

Thank you!

That talk happens next chapter.