Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Eleven of 'Incandescence'- Illumination

lomonaaeren

Chapter Eleven of 'Incandescence'- Illumination

Jul 17, 2009 09:22

rated pg or pg-13, humor, novel-length, mystery, angst, unusual career!draco, pov: draco, auror!fic, incandescence, romance, ewe

Comments 26

xelloss_poo July 17 2009, 13:49:00 UTC

Awwww! How cute! I'm glad they finally got to sort of talk and hopefully only happiness awaits them in the future? :D

lomonaaeren July 19 2009, 01:37:04 UTC

Thank you!

Yes. There's only one more chapter, really not enough time to introduce more complications.

franalan July 17 2009, 14:09:23 UTC

Among the things that Harry’s mouth could produce, Draco learned a moment later, was a current of laughter as rich and warm and soft as a river of sunlight.

Lovely.

lomonaaeren July 19 2009, 01:37:11 UTC

Thank you!

ura_hd July 17 2009, 14:42:09 UTC

very nice

lomonaaeren July 19 2009, 01:37:18 UTC

Thanks!

valkyrie17 July 17 2009, 15:49:15 UTC

Aw...sweet:)

lomonaaeren July 19 2009, 01:37:25 UTC

Thank you very much!

brknhalo241 July 17 2009, 17:03:59 UTC

I think my favorite scene here was Draco smiling at Harry and staring at him until Harry smiled back and then rested his head against Draco. Just loved that....and the way Draco is opening up here and actually looking at Harry as more than a character or a plot is just wonderful.

Late on commenting on other stories since I'm in San Fran this weekend but I will get to them!! Oh, yes....

lomonaaeren July 19 2009, 01:37:57 UTC

Thank you!

I think Draco's ability to see Harry as just a character was destroyed forever by what he learned from Luna and the newspaper photographs.

And no problem! Hope you're enjoying yourself.