Chapter One of 'A Potion Named Desire'- Out She Goes

[lomonaaeren]

Title: A Potion Named Desire
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairing: Harry/Draco preslash, Ron/Hermione, past Harry/other women.
Summary: When Ron dies, Hermione falls into a deep depression. Desperate to relieve her symptoms, Harry reluctantly approaches “independent

Comments

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! I hoped the first chapter would draw people in.

Ron's death was a Quidditch accident from the first germ of the story. I really didn't want him murdered.

The Incident is revealed in full at the end of this story.

[sorringmay]

I have to feel sorry for Hermione. I love how you have taken the trios friendship and used it so far. I also like how you have approached the introduction of Draco. Can Draco actually be practical when Harry is involved :)

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! Hermione is the person I feel sorriest for, though Ron's death hardly affected Harry less.

Draco will be stunned at the reason Harry contacts him, but also secretly gleeful, for more than one reason.

[linaeviel]

I am intrigued! I think the intellectual bent will be a great new angle for the pre-slash. After all, there are supposedly companionate, romantic, and fatuous loves (*)...

Aside: It's interesting; I just started plotting a new story a few days ago where Draco is a filmmaker, but I haven't thought through the details yet. Will you be describing more about what Harry does, or is that more peripheral to the plot of this series (it seems that it is, at least so far)?

Can't wait for the next installment! :)

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you.

The article you linked to is interesting; thanks. I think a lot of H/D stories I've read and written are based more on passion than anything else.

Harry's career will be described more in the second story than the first, when he starts to return to it. But he doesn't actually make movies, if that's what you're asking; he only makes the actual film for wizarding cameras.

[dysonrules]

I was wondering where you've been, lol! This explains it! Fabulous beginning! Definitely looking forward to more!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

I've felt sort of tired and apathetic these last few days, which is why I haven't been posting/commenting as much.

[dysonrules]

*hugs you* I hope you're feeling better!

[gilith_ramaloce]

I knew you wouldn't let me down with a new story! lol And an interesting one at that. I too am curious as to what the Incident is; also what Harry's potion is for, becacuse it's probably more than an anti-depressant.

A wonderful start!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

The Incident will be clarified at the end of this story, as well the nature of Harry's potion.