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lomonaaeren

Chapter One of 'An Alchemical Discontent'- Hello, Draco

Jan 31, 2008 13:20

Title: An Alchemical Discontent
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Rating: PG-13, mostly for innuendo and some light sexual content.
Pairings: Harry/Draco preslash turning into slash, Draco/Daphne Greengrass.
Warnings: DH SPOILERS, ignores epilogue. Past character death. ( Read more... )

an alchemical discontent, an intellectual love affair series

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sorringmay February 1 2008, 06:42:49 UTC

Why am I thinking that Draco is about to do something VERY stupid?

lovely by the way

lomonaaeren February 2 2008, 04:24:26 UTC

Because he is? And you're psychic?

And thanks!

valkyrie17 February 1 2008, 07:24:54 UTC

Ooh...this was a nice surprise:)
I wasn't expecting it so soon (not complaining, btw). Interesting chapter- the plot thickens.

lomonaaeren February 2 2008, 04:24:34 UTC

Thank you!

freshpickletoad February 1 2008, 10:42:47 UTC

I'm so late in reading this! I kept on linking to the 'A Potion Named Desire' page and then realized that duh, of course it wouldn't be put up here now! I'm such a silly girl ( ... )

lomonaaeren February 2 2008, 04:26:55 UTC

Well, if it helps, I've done that before, too. :) And I almost did tag this with the 'a potion named desire' tag for a minute.

'Grounded' to me means about what you're saying it does, yes. I'm glad you like it. The effect of plain description is one that can grate on a reader's nerves, especially in dramatic scenes, but I think it really does work for this story.

Harry will continue with his impulse, ill-thought-out plans for a while.

Kind of canon, yes- though Draco actually married Daphne's younger sister, who may or may not exist in this world.

And I do! I write them more often in novels, because most of the time in one-shots I feel I can't build up the relationship properly (and I think Harry and Draco have too many obstacles to overcome to just jump into bed like that). But the third story will probably have one.

If Harry can figure out how to use his influence, he will.

And thanks for leaving long, long comments!

lycias February 2 2008, 00:00:06 UTC

I'm so excited! This is a great beginning!

lomonaaeren February 2 2008, 04:27:04 UTC

Thank you!

disarming_smile February 2 2008, 00:50:37 UTC

Ohohoho! I'm delighted to see this new chapter and interested about what kind of role Daphne's going to play.
Harry and his rash actions (and budding feelings for certain blonds)are, as usual, very endearing.
Hossa!

lomonaaeren February 2 2008, 04:27:26 UTC

Thanks!

Daphne will be playing- a role usually reserved for male characters, really.