Chapter Five of 'An Alchemical Discontent'- Three Uncomfortable Conversations

[lomonaaeren]

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[lunasky3]

DEAR GOD. AN ALMOST KISS. are you trying to maim your loyal fans or something??? or just get us addicted. which is working quite well I must say... :D but great chapter anyway.. how long until Harry find out about what Draco is doing with Daphne? And will he go all Jealous!Harry on us?? :D:D:D Cannot wait!! :D

[bryoneybrynn]

Mmm! I second that. Jealous!Harry (especially when he's also powerful!Harry) equals superhot!

[lunasky3]

*droools and imagines...* oh dear dear god. BRING IT ON ALREADY AHHHH!!!!! *twitches* cannot wait *twitches again*

[lomonaaeren]

*is innocent* Will it help if I say that that won't be repeated for a little while?

It will be several chapters until Harry learns about Daphne. He's unlikely to get jealous, though, because the potion is specifically designed to repress that.

[dysonrules]

This is torture!!!! It was nice to see him get a speck of revenge on Cordelia, but I think that just opened another evil can o' worms.

Bore Daphne. Good luck with that, Draco, damn it all to hell.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

And yeah, Cordelia is not pleased. On the other hand, not paying her off wouldn't have worked either.

Draco assumes that just acting the same as he always does will be enough to bore Daphne. He's very naive sometimes.

[firedraygon97]

Haha, Harry all demanding about why Draco's leg is hurt makes me happy. I hope Draco can tell him the secret soon, before someone nasty like Cordelia can find out and leak it to the public. D: Please write more soon! I'm looking forward to the meeting with Harry and Hermione!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

Cordelia finding out would probably displease Daphne as well, and believe me, she doesn't want to do that. No one wants to do that.

Meeting with Harry and Hermione is definitely next chapter.

[chyldofeternity]

Great chapter! You're killing us with this unresolved tension between the me! *headdesk!*

I did just catch one little thing: forty thousand Galleons were no easy thing to life, and he refused to sweat in front of a creditor.

That should read thing to lift shouldn't it? ^_^ *still bows down in awe of your magnificence*

[lomonaaeren]

Aw. *pats* It goes on for a while like this, I'm afraid.

Thanks for the correction! *edits*

[aubergineautumn]

hmmm. Ginny is annoying. I like it.

[lomonaaeren]

*sigh* I am never going to write a non-annoying Ginny, am I?