Chapter Fourteen of 'An Alchemical Discontent'- Close on the Trail

[lomonaaeren]

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[astartes_amazon]

I love the way you drop just enough hints for readers to start speculating, and we do! As soon as it is mentioned that the potion changes with Harry, I leapt upon the fact that Harry's priorities might have changed, particularly with the relationship between him and Ginny beginning to get beyond the 'incident'.

You are a master craftsman, my dear.
Love, me.

[lomonaaeren]

Heh, maybe. But Harry is scared enough of hurting Ginny that it would seem to be an awfully strange change...

And thank you very much!

[aubergineautumn]

angst, angst, angst. Brilliant!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[kittie8571]

Go Hermione! Great chapter.

[lomonaaeren]

It's fun writing a more active Hermione, now that she's got beyond her depression. (The story she tells next chapter will be fine to write out, too).

[ravenqueen55]

Great chapter. I love the conversations between Harry and Draco in this story; they really do make me feel the intellectual connection between the two.

And kick ass Hermione totally rocks!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! So much of their relationship now is tied up in the Desire potion that I wonder if they will ever wind up with a "normal" conversation. *grin*

[lunasky3]

aaaaaand there's hermione. so much for knowing when to stop when you're hurt... and yay for harry for admitting the magic thing to draco!!! :D

[lomonaaeren]

Well, maybe it was all Theo's blood. :)

And Harry went farther than I planned when starting the chapter- which, of course, upsets the plot a little.