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raphsody606 March 19 2008, 18:25:21 UTC
Harry clamped his lips between his teeth and told Draco, “He’s the one Hermione brought back. She was all over blood, so she went into the loo to clean up.”

Something is wonky here darlin. But an absolutely fascinating story transition here. I'm very curious as to how this is going to all work out.

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lomonaaeren March 20 2008, 02:10:02 UTC
No; in this case, "all over blood" is a slang usage that I've seen before.

And thank you!

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chyldofeternity March 19 2008, 18:40:11 UTC
This is great! The hint that something inside of Harry has changed, that infact his potion is removing something else is a great foreshadow technique! ^^ *loves foreshadowing, cause then can reread and be all like OOOOOOH I get it now!*

I have a feeling that what Harry hates the most about himself right now, is not his lack of control over his emotions and magic, but his lack of ability to protect Draco - which means his potion would work to increase his ability to protect Draco, which would in turn do his magical mumbojumbo that's been going on *bounces up and down excitedly* Am I right??

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lomonaaeren March 20 2008, 02:10:34 UTC
Thanks! In this case, I'm not sure how subtle the foreshadowing is, but it's definitely there!

And do you really want me to answer that question?

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bryoneybrynn March 19 2008, 19:09:07 UTC
Man, I'm loving Hermione in this. She's one scary witch when someone's threatening the people she cares about!

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lomonaaeren March 20 2008, 02:10:55 UTC
Thanks! I think she has a lot of fun threatening people, personally, after the way she had to take some time off doing anything active after Ron's death.

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ravenqueen55 March 19 2008, 22:17:44 UTC
The changes in Harry, Draco's excitement, Hermione's ruthlessness...all very entertaining!

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lomonaaeren March 20 2008, 02:11:34 UTC
Thank you!

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firedraygon97 March 19 2008, 23:41:08 UTC
Hmm, Theodore's reasoning for why he destroyed Draco's shop is pretty lame. I think Theodore's a little too pathetic in this fic, haha. Hermione, on the other hand, totally owns everyone. I love the Good Cop, Bad Cop routine. Nice chapter!

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lomonaaeren March 20 2008, 02:11:59 UTC
He really is pathetic. But then, he wouldn't have obeyed his sister and risked his reputation and life before this if he wasn't.

And thank you!

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