Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Sixteen of 'An Alchemical Discontent'- Two Traps

lomonaaeren

Chapter Sixteen of 'An Alchemical Discontent'- Two Traps

Mar 23, 2008 20:58

rated pg or pg-13, an alchemical discontent, an intellectual love affair series, harry/draco, angst, ewe, romance

Comments 35

xelloss_poo March 24 2008, 01:18:50 UTC

Shit!!! Noooo~~~~!!!!!!!

What's going to happen!!!! Harry, use your Spider-sense to know that Draco is in danger and then go fucking bad-ass and save him!!! Save him Harry!! Save him!!!!!

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:13:01 UTC

Harry is rather in danger of being attacked by spiders right now. :)

chyldofeternity March 24 2008, 01:21:42 UTC

OMG! Harry's gunna go ballistic when he gets back! But kudos to Draco for catching on so quickly to the wards being down. And Damn your Daphne sares me! *hides behind the powerful!Harry*

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:13:27 UTC

He probably will, yes. But that's assuming he can figure out what happened. Daphne won't leave a lot of clues.

And thanks!

ravenqueen55 March 24 2008, 01:28:11 UTC

Oh fuck.

Excuse the vulgarity, but it's the first thing that popped into my head, and it pretty much sums up how I feel!!!

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:13:42 UTC

That's fine. Fuck knows I'm vulgar enough in my stories. :)

aubergineautumn March 24 2008, 02:05:28 UTC

what a fast chapter! I liked this line-

And it only made sense that his magic was increasing in the swiftness of its response to him, because his magic was the best tool he had for protecting Draco.

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:13:49 UTC

Thank you!

firedraygon97 March 24 2008, 02:12:34 UTC

My gosh, so many times I thought you were going to end the chapter, but it kept going! So much action here. Urgh, I knew when Harry kept going on and on about the wards that someone was going to break through. Too much confidence is a bad thing! CONSTANT VIGILANCE!!

I'm hoping Harry's experience with Acromantulas comes in handy.

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:14:53 UTC

At first, the bulk of the chapter was going to be the meeting with Cordelia, but it seems there was a lot of other stuff first to get out of the way.

Well, Harry has reason to be confident about his wards. He didn't know the witch at the door was anyone really dangerous, and Draco couldn't tell him.

Thanks for commenting!