BBB: Sideways [Part 3]

[lone_wo1f]

Pairing(s): Brendon/Ryan, Cash/Singer, Jon/Spencer
Word Count: 20,603
Rating/Warnings: PG13 / 2 character deaths
Disclaimer: All of this is completely made up and not true.
Summary: Ryan runs away from home when he’s ten and begins working as a newsboy in New York City. He sells papers on the streets to make money and lives with his friends at Pete

Comments

[exmptfromsanity]

I really like how you kept Cash and Jon as kind of vague characters and didn't go into them in as much detail. That way, saying they died, you knew what it meant to Ryan but you weren't necessarily as attached to their characters. Not to say it didn't make me horribly sad because I love both of them tons.

I'm not a big fan of Ryan/Brendon but I like the way you worked Ryan's umm... characteristics and ways of dealing with people in this.

I also may have listened to my Newsies soundtrack for about an hour after reading the first chapter.

[mostlymailboxes]

I managed to keep the tears down until Jon officially died. This piece was heart breakingly beautiful. Keep upthe good work dear.

♥

[pensluff]

I wanted to cry when Cash died but managed not too but when Jon died I just couldn't not cry.

You wrote a fucking fantastic story. It was beautifully written and I love it for its sadness and beauty and fantasticness.