This is the beginning of a story. I hate typing "he said" "she said"

[lonelyman12]

A man of medium height wearing a tan suit stepped into a park. He remarked quickly a newfound serenity. It was late autumn, and the strength of the leaves’ fingers faded with their color. “I shall sit here a while and dawdle,” he thought to himself, “as today is a day less busy than others.”

His coat spread on the turf, the man sat down to the

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[bisskey]

Tim,
HUGE fan of this.

Personally, I find the little associations and repetitions really intriguing.

[sarski]

This reminds me of a short story I read by Kurt Vonnegut. You're a very talented and contemplative writer.