Fic: Day By Day - G

Aug 14, 2007 14:14

Recipient: twistingflame
Creator: Renae chase_acow

Title: Day By Day
Rating: G for kisses
Prompt: apocalypse, hankerchief, sane enough when sober
Disclaimer: La la, not mine.
Spoilers: None it’s just enough AU that way.
Summary: Earth is in ruins, SG-1 is broken, and John gets to know Vala. Every day.

Day By Day )

2007:things, fic

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Comments 14

zabbers August 14 2007, 21:26:13 UTC
I love this. So many details in such a small space. Poor Vala. Poor SG-1.

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chase_acow August 18 2007, 16:52:16 UTC
Thank you so much! I wanted to flesh it out more, but it just didn't work out that way. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, and I'm sorry for taking so long to reply. : )

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sindohrah August 14 2007, 23:39:36 UTC
Tee! This was good! Excellent characterizations! Poor John and Vala...

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chase_acow August 18 2007, 16:54:30 UTC
Thank you! I was nervous writing John and Vala, I don't have much practice. I actually tried two different ideas before ending up with this one.

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twistingflame August 16 2007, 14:30:31 UTC
Oh this is absolutely lovely. Avoidant!John is so very canon it hurts and I just want to squeeze lost little Vala. Thank you so much!

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chase_acow August 18 2007, 16:55:32 UTC
Thank you! I really wanted you to like it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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gaiaanarchy August 16 2007, 21:42:59 UTC
This is great! I love the premise, and how they are all kind of broken, and John's waryness of all the emotions wound up in that. Thanks for writing!

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chase_acow August 18 2007, 17:06:59 UTC
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I tried doing something with a spunky Vala, but in the end, this is what came out. Thank you for the comment, I really appreciate it. : )

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melagan August 17 2007, 12:10:18 UTC
It seems so strange, in a good way, for Vala to be this uncertain and yet I have no trouble seeing this as exactly so. Her and John are both a little lost aren't they.

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chase_acow August 18 2007, 17:14:30 UTC
I think so, that they're both a little lost, I mean. Also that both of them know how to put on a show to cover it up most of the time from most people. Vala is such a strong character, but it was neat to bring her down like this too. Thank you for the comment. : )

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