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Oct 31, 2009 20:48

:3 Feel free to tell me how I'm doing with Scar here~

Comments/questions/concerns, etc. Praise is welcomed too! XPP

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internecineowl November 2 2009, 06:29:27 UTC
THUS FAR I only have one comment and it's not really on scar as such:

it's the formatting! I find your comments/posts really difficult to read because you have the actions mixed in with the dialogue like so:

I could help you out. [he drinks coffee] Maybe.

Instead of broken up like so:
I could help you out.

[he drinks coffee]

Maybe.

The latter is just much easier to read and would probably result in more people... ...well, reading and commenting/interacting with Scar. For me, I'm not going to lie, I kind of glaze over what he says because it's difficult for me to parse with the formatting as is.

DON'T SHOOT ME.

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lonestray November 2 2009, 07:48:12 UTC
-shoots-

XP

Just kidding, it's okay. xDD I was just going off how I was seeing people format their network posts in the week I spent stalking this place. xD;; But then again, they also make their actions in a smaller font which I do not know how to do. =/

I'll keep that in mind for future posts, though! (Do you want me to fix the one I posted on Nagi's post?)

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internecineowl November 2 2009, 07:53:07 UTC
/is shot!!!

You make the font smaller by using

Your text here

....sorry for the textbox. LJ is weird with those symbols. :/

And yeah, people use smaller fonts, um, there's a lot of breaking up of actions and dialogue too but it depends more on the person's style.

...

So it depends on the person but either breaking it up or using smaller fonts would be much easier to read.

And NO, THAT'S OKAY, I JUST HAVEN'T ANSWERED YET FOR UNRELATED REASONS. :D

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lonestray November 3 2009, 07:18:30 UTC
Is it easier to read now? -posted a few more things and replied to the one with Nagi-

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Question! girl_unlocking August 17 2010, 17:40:52 UTC
Does Scar have the locket full of hair in his possession?

...just wondering >.> <.<

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Re: Question! lonestray August 17 2010, 17:47:14 UTC
HE DOES.

He got it in an event where things from home were showing up at people's doorsteps. XD

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Re: Question! girl_unlocking August 17 2010, 17:48:48 UTC
JHFGSJGFJSGFJSGFJHSGJHFGJSGJFS.

yay

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Re: Question! girl_unlocking August 17 2010, 19:14:50 UTC
I AM EXCITE.

ALSO, I LIKE, SENT YOU A PLURK.

I am so unused to this whole no editing comments thing :/

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