Comments | lonevivi: FIC: Moan. Harry/Ron. NC-17. smut

lonevivi

FIC: Moan. Harry/Ron. NC-17. smut_69 prompt.

Dec 10, 2005 04:25

I've decided to try my hand at smut_69. You can find my table here. I really loved the way shocolate weaved all her stories together (go now and read her fanfic100 table if you haven't already), so I was going to try something similar to that, with all my pieces telling a story of Harry and Ron (and Harry and Ron sex, of course!). Inspiration for ( Read more... )

harry/ron, smut_69, fic

Comments 17

delicatetruth December 10 2005, 21:56:17 UTC

*wibble*

Poor Harry. So confused. Lovely emotions though!

lothelary December 10 2005, 22:18:01 UTC

mmm.. lovely beginning. i'm waiting for the next. I love ron, but.. damn boy! I almost could hear Harry's heart breaking...

santa_elidan December 11 2005, 01:12:39 UTC

Oh dear! Can't say how relieved I am that this is going to be a multi chapter fic. And a damn good one furthermore!
The start was brilliant. Am looking forward to your story very much now.

tariana December 11 2005, 01:20:08 UTC

This is very good!

dontgiveahoot December 11 2005, 01:33:15 UTC

That was fabulous. Not only was it hugely hot, it was also believable, and leaves plenty of room for development in further prompts. Ron's appearing and asking "Why me?", the laughter over Krum's shark-head, the soft warmth turning slowly to erotic heat, and finally the emptiness of the bed in the daylight. I like - a LOT.