FIC: Writhe. Harry/Ron. NC-17. smut_69 prompt.

[lonevivi]

Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Series: Part 2 of my smut_69 table. I'm trying to tell a story here, so read the first one, well, first.
Notes: I wanted to have this finished ages ago, but I've been having a real hectic time in life right now and I'm not thrilled with how this came out. I wanted it to be more. *Sighs* Oh well. My mind has been

Comments

[delicatetruth]

It was the need that tore his heart and made him turn away.

Ah! *sniffle*

Poor Boys.

[tornado_of_snow]

oh wow. you have the best icon. :D

[golwenadaneth]

It was the need that tore his heart and made him turn away.

Jeez hun, you know how to make a girl go all teary eyes.
A good chapter, I know you wanted it to be more, but I think it was wonderful, and Harry thinking about what Hermione would say slayed me.
Write more soon *puppy eyes*
Gx

[shocolate]

"It doesn't matter. I'd do it again. You know that," Ron said, but then his voice became quieter, huskier. "I'd do anything for you, Harry."

But, sweetheart, it has to be because you want it, too.

*sigh*

I'm so proud of you!

You, not Ron.

Keep going!

[slash_kitten]

I'm reading this with some celtic-sounding christmas music... you should try that, it makes it even more stunning. Just a tip beforehand :P

Oh man, it's so frustrating to see those two idiots. Aaaah, I hate boys. Why can't they just figure it out??? /rant

Poor Harry though. oO

[leeicons]

Poor Harry. I'm sure he's being tortured with thoughts. Ron need to realize stuff too. Oh and that last line nearly killed me...poor Harry he needs Ron...*sigh* Great job I can't wait to read more