Very nice - as always I wanted to know more. I particularly liked the toenail clippings - that passage really caught the way a repeated sound can catch your mind and it encapsulated the pathos of the situation.
tankee. they're just 5 minute exercises to limber up (before going off and running a marathon of procrastinatin) but I'm often surprised how little stories seem to build themselves around a few random words.
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Keep writing, keep persevering - it's good.
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