Comments | loozy: Bumps on the Road *Don, Robin, Don/Robin; PG-13/K*

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Bumps on the Road Don, Robin, Don/Robin; PG-13/K

Aug 19, 2009 00:06

Title: Bumps in the Road
Series: Bumps in the Road
Universe: Odyssey
Author: loozy
Characters: Don, Robin; Don/Robin
Rating: PG- 13/ K
Summary: To stop the drugs would be bad, too, because he has a feeling that his ribs, wrist and nose hurt like hell, not to mention his head.
Word Count: 298; 266; 265; 285; 221; 289; 300; 298; 299
Spoilers: none
Notes ( Read more... )

creativity: universe: odyssey, 'ships: d/r, fangirl: numb3rs, creativity: writing, creativity: series: bumps on the road, creativity: drabble, creativity: fanfiction

Comments 18

valeriev84 August 18 2009, 22:30:31 UTC

Poor, poor Donny. You gave him a hard time of it.

I still love how his thoughts get warped, first by pain and shock and then by the medicine. Gotta love drugged love confessions, and I can just picture Robin's face there.

Sure I can't talk you into having Alan overhearing that particular bit?

loozy August 18 2009, 22:52:34 UTC

His drugged ramblings?

I'm not promising anything yet, but the idea has been taken to the Moleskine *and since I am determined to make a fic out of every idea that actually goes into the Moleskine... You might never know... ;)*

And yay for liking and thanks for reviewing!!!

I have to admit, this is a piece of mine that I actually really like for a change *squee*

valeriev84 August 18 2009, 22:59:15 UTC

Yay! I will do my best to influence your Muse into writing this one
:)

loozy August 18 2009, 23:00:23 UTC

How come I knew that I would get this exact same reaction? :D

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magisterequitum August 18 2009, 22:48:44 UTC

This was great.

A perfect read for my night.

=)

loozy August 18 2009, 22:53:18 UTC

I aim to please :D

magisterequitum August 18 2009, 22:55:38 UTC

And you do!

loozy August 18 2009, 22:59:22 UTC

Brilliant!

Yay for you liking it!

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loozy August 18 2009, 23:19:21 UTC

I LOVE YOUR ICON!!!

*had to caplock this, there was no other way... OMG... I am... Oh wow... I love it...*

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loozy August 18 2009, 23:22:24 UTC

Me, too...

I cannot create icons to save my life, but I really want one of the scene where they are holding hands, just one with the hands...

Now I am coherent again, and can thank you for the review and am very glad you enjoyed it :D

aleo_70 August 20 2009, 22:42:11 UTC

Drugged out Don trying to be brave is a hoot! Loved how his thoughts kept wandering off into strangeness.

You really did a number on him but I think he will only win in the end, telling Robin how much he loves her whether he is drugged or not will only benefit him in the long run.

loozy September 2 2009, 11:30:25 UTC

I am slowly moving towards whumping him more and more severely :D

And writing him drugged was a lot of fun, which I would love to repeat, but then again, it would probably become overused, so I'll just stick to the mad whumping with no funny drug intervention :P