Girl Part 1

[lopo271]

Disclaimer: I own nothing
A/N: Comments welcome. Oh, and I need a beta. Pretty please?

An old man sits on the sidewalk, his guitar in his lap. With his eyes closed, he strums the guitar and softly sings; “Is there anybody going to listen to my story, all about the girl who came to stay? She’s the type of girl you want so much it makes you sorry,

Comments

[therealval]

i like it BERRY much :)
i cannot wait to see where it goes.

[lopo271]

i like you BERRY much for reading and commenting :)

[let_me_stop]

Oooh, I'm intrigued. Very intrigued.

[lopo271]

yay!

thanks for reading :)

[covah_87]

I'm way excited to see where this goes. Great start!

[lopo271]

thanks!

[madndizzee]

I'm intrigued too. Totally want to see how Rachel's gonna accomplish this challenge. You don't write like you need a beta, btw. So what exactly are your requirements for one?

[lopo271]

well this chapters fine because i got a friend to check it, but the rest of the story could probably do with a check up. I think i have a beta lined up though, so hopefully the other chapters will end up like this one :)

[walsen925]

ooooh, rachels' a HO! lol. interesting start. :D

[lopo271]

haha, underneath the argyle she's not that innocent. thanks for reading!