Naya/Heather Fic: I Am The Liar and You Are The Saint Chapt 18/?

[lor_jess176]

Title: I Am The Liar And You Are The Saint
Rating: R
Summary: She had become an expert at putting on a face when she was around Heather. Naya just hoped it was enough for people not to realize it, because honestly Heather was wearing her down.
Pairings: Naya/Heather, Other: Heather/OC, Naya/Mark, Side Dianna/Lea
Disclaimer: I do not own anything, this

Comments

[proudly_so]

This chapter was amazing! I loved everything about it, but everything better be okay. Troll Murphy better not ruin everything :P

[lor_jess176]

aw thanks!

[anonymous]

So glad you updated! I liked this chapter for the most part, but I found Naya not being at all angry at Heather very unrealistic, not to mention dramatically unsatisfying. And personally I think Mark is the only one looking out for Naya at this point, including Naya herself, so I didn't like him being portrayed as in the wrong at the end. Everything he said about Heather was true, even if his conclusion was flawed. I totally want Brittana to end up together, but Heather needs to acknowledge and accept her immense flaws instead of constantly trying to excuse them.

[lor_jess176]

hi there!

thanks for the comment. i actually agree with you... i didnt really think about it that way. intentionally things were supposed to go very differently, but the plot kinda twisted another way (mainly it was because ppl have been really wanting them to get together soon... it has been 18 chapters after all lol). but it was actually supposed to go a little more the way u wanted, but i was afraid ppl were going to think i was backtracking. oh well, what can you do lol. but thanks for pointing that stuff out! its much appreciated

[hotentrepreneur]

I totally thought that's what you were about to do and I was already huffing and puffing thinking dear lord now we have to wait some more for Heather to grow a pair and admit her obvious feelings. So I'm not gonna lie, I would have been one of those people you just described. But by all means don't let that interfere with your writing process. You have to be happy with what you write. But I can see how that's a delicate balance along with pleasing your readers as well. The only thing that bugs me is when some writers spend so much time building up until it gets tiresome and repetitive after a while and then when it's FINALLY time for the story to climax and things to get resolved the author abandons it. Now that really kills me. So please stick this story out til the end. You promised me! Its the best Heya story I've ever read. None of the others measure up to yours

[lor_jess176]

thanks so much for the comment!

yah i know i shouldnt let readers affect how the story goes... but i like to tailor to what you guys want from a fanfic, because as a reader myself i love when u can tell that authors are listening. so thank you so much for you're honest feedback. it means the world!

i can promise this... this is pretty much the last of the build up, naya wont be doubting herself too much anymore, however... there's still one more conflict until the end. i hope that keeps everyone still interested. but this chapter was really a turn around. alot of things that happened werent supposed to so quickly, but at the time when i was writing i just felt like the characters would act how they did. hope i wasnt too impulsive!

anyways. i'm enjoying these responses so much! you have no idea! it really helps me, and i hope you all continue to do so!!! thanks for dropping by!

phenomenal

[ext_691646]

hey

[smithsgirl87]

just read all of this. It's amazing. I hope everything is okay.

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[laurenh91]

Hi guys, so I've just spoken to lor_jess176, and she's having problems logging into her account. She's asked me to tell you all that there will be a temporary hiatus in the fic until she can get back online. She apologises for this and hopes to be back with you all soon :) xxx